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not entitled to your love

i tugged momentarily at the sudden disbelief' like a single lighting srike in the darkness of a stormy night, Id once pledged to share Life and Eternity with thee' I potrayed to thee the acts of LOVE and as we lay- unreluctantly- under the face of the moon and the stars, We created & injectded majestictic spirals of strong emotions of devotion.... Yet sadly i was not entitled to your love. At my heart's request, i tried to be brave, when violent volcanoes errupted in the inner core of my heart, when loving you was a drop in the ocean of pain & saddness yet sadly i was never entitled to your love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 1/19/2016 9:21:00 PM
DREAM, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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Date: 2/21/2015 9:52:00 PM
Hi Dream.. powerful, well constructed write, my friend. Poetry Soup is an awesome place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other gifted poets. Comment on their works and they will comment on yours. Give one of the Contest a try as well. I look forward to reading more of your good writes in the days to come. Please take time to check me out, ok!
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Date: 2/21/2015 12:16:00 AM
Hi Dream, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to get through the year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/20/2015 10:07:00 PM
Dream, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/20/2015 8:23:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Dream Chaser. You will find friends here, and receive feedback on your poems. Comment on the poems of other poets and they will reciprocate.
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