Not Entitled To Your Love

i tugged momentarily
at the sudden disbelief'
like a single lighting srike 
in the darkness of a stormy night,
Id once pledged to share
Life and Eternity with thee'
I potrayed to thee the acts of LOVE
and as we lay- unreluctantly- 
under the face of the moon and the stars,
We created & injectded majestictic spirals
of strong emotions of devotion....
Yet sadly i was not entitled to your love.

At my heart's request, 
i tried to be brave,
when violent volcanoes errupted 
in the inner core of my heart,
when loving you was a drop in the ocean of pain & saddness
yet sadly i was never entitled to your love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
January 22, 2025 at 9:49 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
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January 19, 2016 at 9:21 PM
DREAM, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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February 21, 2015 at 12:16 AM
Hi Dream, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to get through the year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
A  Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 10:07 PM
Dream, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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February 20, 2015 at 8:23 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Dream Chaser. You will find friends here, and receive feedback on your poems. Comment on the poems of other poets and they will reciprocate.
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