Eric Ashford Poet Free verse

Not Done Yet

I’m not done yet,
but I’ve figured out one thing.
All this life experience, this world,
this reality,
is all about me, not you.
It is my mind that creates everything –
truth, actuality, emotions, hate and love,
dog s..t  and daffodils,
just me.
The good news for you is,
I’m not done yet.

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Eric Ashford August 12, 2019 at 9:13 AM Ha! Maybe you did Richard. We are all seeing reality from our own compound brains perhaps?

Richard Lamoureux August 12, 2019 at 9:08 AM I feel like I just had a matrix moment.

DM Babbit August 10, 2019 at 11:39 AM As long as we still breathe, we're not done, yet. Good one. Eric Ashford August 10, 2019 at 12:34 PM Cheers D.M.B. nice to get positive feedback.