Sunita U.D Palawon Poet Quatern

Not Destined For Each Other

Game  of  god   or  a  way  of  life  …
Fate left  me  so   weak   and   tiny.
Forbidden  love  ; a  trick  of  life.
Passion  alights  in   brevity.

Years   back  ,  decision   hard  I  made.
     Game  of  god   or  a  way  of  life  …
A last  kiss  and   goodbye  I bade,
Shattered,  I could   not   be  his  wife.

Lived  in   hope  ; love has afterlife.
He came back  to   hold  me  in   maze  
     Game  of  god   or  a  way  of  life  …
At  my  door  he stood  like   in   daze. 

Patient! Time   stood   with  nurse's  word.
Ethic  was  fighting   emotion, 
His  wife  sat  beside  him. Absurd!
     Game  of  god   or  a  way  of  life  …

30/07/16
Contest: A Love Lost, then found only to lose again - Brenda Chiri Caroll
Quartern: 8 syllables per lines, 16 lines, 4 quatrains with refrain
Honored: Poem of the Day 1/08/16
Judged 26/08/16 -Win - 3rd place, Glory.

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Sandra Haight August 26, 2016 at 2:42 PM Sunita, back to congratulate you on your fine 3rd Place podium win! Hugs, Sandra Sunita U.D Palawon August 26, 2016 at 11:34 PM Thanks much for reading again and the very nice comment. Appreciate, Sunita :)

Beautiful Scars August 26, 2016 at 10:40 AM Sunita, this is amazingly written! well deserved win dear friend! congrats on your placement :)-luloo Sunita U.D Palawon August 26, 2016 at 11:33 PM Thanks for stopping by Laura and the nice comment. So kind of you. :) Sunita

Janice Canerdy August 26, 2016 at 8:41 AM Back to say CONGRATULATIONS on your win. Janice Sunita U.D Palawon August 26, 2016 at 8:47 AM Thanks Janice for the warm thought and reading again! Love Sunita

Janice Canerdy August 7, 2016 at 5:50 PM Very well-written, Sunita. Janice Sunita U.D Palawon August 8, 2016 at 3:48 AM Thanks for reading Janice...kind of you..glad you like. :) Sunita

Andrea Dietrich August 6, 2016 at 9:31 PM oh my, a surprise ending and not one you would like to have happen!! Love seeing you write in quatern form, it's a favorite form of mine! Sunita U.D Palawon August 7, 2016 at 7:37 AM Thanks for going through and appreciating the form, I'm trying with new forms...ya that's life and so real for some lovers...unfortunately..Love Sunita

Casarah Nance August 2, 2016 at 7:41 AM A day late on my reading but still a hearty congrats on yesterdays feature as poem of the day. What I really like about this poem beside the message inside is the spacing of your words, it gives it a stronger texture to it. Very good Sunita. :) Sunita U.D Palawon August 2, 2016 at 11:24 AM Never mind my country time is different from yours! :D Thanks a lot for reading and the nice comment. :) Sunita

Sunita U.D Palawon August 1, 2016 at 11:16 PM Thanks Poetry Soup and poet friends for honouring my poem POTD! I'm so glad. :D Sunita

Liam Mcdaid August 1, 2016 at 11:01 AM Beautifully painted piece and congratulations on poem if the day excellent pen sunita Sunita U.D Palawon August 1, 2016 at 11:14 PM I'm glad you appreciate. Thanks for going through. :) Sunita

Sara Chansarkar August 1, 2016 at 10:07 AM Beautiful poem,Sunita!Congratulations! Sunita U.D Palawon August 1, 2016 at 11:13 PM Thanks my dear for the nice comment. :) Sunita

Sandra Haight August 1, 2016 at 8:57 AM Sunita, back again to congratulate you on your poem being honored as Poem Of The Day! Hugs, Sandra Sunita U.D Palawon August 1, 2016 at 11:12 PM Thanks Sandra for reading and leaving such nice comments on my writes. Im so glad the form went well. :D Sunita

Anne-Lise Andresen August 1, 2016 at 7:47 AM - A really great poem - Congratulations, Sunita :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sunita U.D Palawon August 1, 2016 at 11:11 PM Hi Anne, thanks to you and for the nice comment. Love Sunita

Street Poet August 1, 2016 at 7:34 AM Brillint work of art dear.. Very much liked Sunita U.D Palawon August 1, 2016 at 11:10 PM Nice to read such encouraging comment from you. Thanks for going through. :) Sunita

Alexis Y. August 1, 2016 at 7:20 AM Hi Sunita, This is a good entry for contest.It such a heartfelt write. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Enjoy the honor! :-) Alexis Sunita U.D Palawon August 1, 2016 at 11:09 PM Thank you Alexis for reading my poems and your nice comments. It's such an encouragement. :D Sunita

Chrisdad Kojo Arthur August 1, 2016 at 7:04 AM great one..congrats Sunita U.D Palawon August 1, 2016 at 11:08 PM Thanks for going through and commenting. :) Sunita

Charlie Smith August 1, 2016 at 6:36 AM Congratulations Sunita on POTD honors... Sunita U.D Palawon August 1, 2016 at 11:07 PM Thanks a lot for reading and your nice comment. I'm so glad it was retained as POTD. :) Sunita

Daniel Turner August 1, 2016 at 6:22 AM Back to say Congratulations Sunita for POTD. Very well deserved:) Sunita U.D Palawon August 1, 2016 at 11:06 PM Thanks Daniel, I'm glad the poem is appreciated. Thanks again for your nice comments. :) Sunita

Jan Allison August 1, 2016 at 6:04 AM well written Sunita and congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx Sunita U.D Palawon August 1, 2016 at 11:04 PM Wow Thanks so much for reading. I'm glad the form turned out good, 1st attempt. :) Sunita

Anisha Dutta July 31, 2016 at 6:07 PM Very good write Sunita. Our emotions are never honored by destiny. Wish you best for contest Sunita U.D Palawon July 31, 2016 at 11:06 PM Ya and at times so difficult to accept...Thanks Anisha for reading. Love Sunita :)

Winged Warrior July 31, 2016 at 11:34 AM Love builds and Love destroys in so many ways...great write...is it God or is it US...god bless...^WW^ Sunita U.D Palawon July 31, 2016 at 11:04 PM I do agree, once I used to think having love reciprocated is a boon but when this is achieved and there's lost, you are just held in an emotional block thinking what went wrong? Thanks for going through and your comment. :)Sunita

Sandra Haight July 31, 2016 at 10:53 AM So emotionally expressed in your well-written Quatern with the repetitive line that questions the 'why', Sunita. I wish you all the best for the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra Sunita U.D Palawon July 31, 2016 at 11:01 PM I'm so glad the form turned out to be good and the poem is appreciated, I had some difficulty keeping 8 syllables per line and I'm glad it conveys the message. Thanks Sandra for reading and for your nice comment. :) Sunita

Andrea Dietrich July 30, 2016 at 6:59 PM Sadly, I think both a game of God AND way of life. Nice way to do the contest, Sunita. Sunita U.D Palawon July 30, 2016 at 11:24 PM Ya true...thanks for your support and encouragement with ever kind words. God bless you and all the best. Love Sunita :)

Daniel Turner July 30, 2016 at 4:03 PM Looks good and reads good. I think it's excellent, Sunita. good luck in contest. Sunita U.D Palawon July 30, 2016 at 11:22 PM Oh I'm relieved that it is appreciated and thanks for going through and to the PS for guidance with forms explanation. :) Sunita

Sunita U.D Palawon July 30, 2016 at 12:05 PM Hi, friends, I have tried the Quartern for the first time. I would be glad to have your suggestions. Thanks. Sunita