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Not Destined For Each Other

Game of god or a way of life … Fate left me so weak and tiny. Forbidden love ; a trick of life. Passion alights in brevity. Years back , decision hard I made. Game of god or a way of life … A last kiss and goodbye I bade, Shattered, I could not be his wife. Lived in hope ; love has afterlife. He came back to hold me in maze Game of god or a way of life … At my door he stood like in daze. Patient! Time stood with nurse's word. Ethic was fighting emotion, His wife sat beside him. Absurd! Game of god or a way of life … 30/07/16 Contest: A Love Lost, then found only to lose again - Brenda Chiri Caroll Quartern: 8 syllables per lines, 16 lines, 4 quatrains with refrain Honored: Poem of the Day 1/08/16 Judged 26/08/16 -Win - 3rd place, Glory.

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Sandra Haight

Date: 8/26/2016 2:42:00 PM

Sunita, back to congratulate you on your fine 3rd Place podium win! Hugs, Sandra

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/26/2016 11:34:00 PM

Thanks much for reading again and the very nice comment. Appreciate, Sunita :)

Lu Loo

Date: 8/26/2016 10:40:00 AM

Sunita, this is amazingly written! well deserved win dear friend! congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/26/2016 11:33:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by Laura and the nice comment. So kind of you. :) Sunita

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/26/2016 8:41:00 AM

Back to say CONGRATULATIONS on your win. Janice

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/26/2016 8:47:00 AM

Thanks Janice for the warm thought and reading again! Love Sunita

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/7/2016 5:50:00 PM

Very well-written, Sunita. Janice

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/8/2016 3:48:00 AM

Thanks for reading Janice...kind of you..glad you like. :) Sunita

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/6/2016 9:31:00 PM

oh my, a surprise ending and not one you would like to have happen!! Love seeing you write in quatern form, it's a favorite form of mine!

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/7/2016 7:37:00 AM

Thanks for going through and appreciating the form, I'm trying with new forms...ya that's life and so real for some lovers...unfortunately..Love Sunita

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/2/2016 7:41:00 AM

A day late on my reading but still a hearty congrats on yesterdays feature as poem of the day. What I really like about this poem beside the message inside is the spacing of your words, it gives it a stronger texture to it. Very good Sunita. :)

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/2/2016 11:24:00 AM

Never mind my country time is different from yours! :D Thanks a lot for reading and the nice comment. :) Sunita

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 8/1/2016 11:16:00 PM

Thanks Poetry Soup and poet friends for honouring my poem POTD! I'm so glad. :D Sunita

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 8/1/2016 11:01:00 AM

Beautifully painted piece and congratulations on poem if the day excellent pen sunita

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/1/2016 11:14:00 PM

I'm glad you appreciate. Thanks for going through. :) Sunita

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 8/1/2016 10:07:00 AM

Beautiful poem,Sunita!Congratulations!

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/1/2016 11:13:00 PM

Thanks my dear for the nice comment. :) Sunita

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/1/2016 8:57:00 AM

Sunita, back again to congratulate you on your poem being honored as Poem Of The Day! Hugs, Sandra

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/1/2016 11:12:00 PM

Thanks Sandra for reading and leaving such nice comments on my writes. Im so glad the form went well. :D Sunita

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/1/2016 7:47:00 AM

- A really great poem - Congratulations, Sunita :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/1/2016 11:11:00 PM

Hi Anne, thanks to you and for the nice comment. Love Sunita

Street Poet

Date: 8/1/2016 7:34:00 AM

Brillint work of art dear.. Very much liked

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/1/2016 11:10:00 PM

Nice to read such encouraging comment from you. Thanks for going through. :) Sunita

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/1/2016 7:20:00 AM

Hi Sunita, This is a good entry for contest.It such a heartfelt write. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Enjoy the honor! :-) Alexis

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/1/2016 11:09:00 PM

Thank you Alexis for reading my poems and your nice comments. It's such an encouragement. :D Sunita

Chrisdad Kojo Arthur

Date: 8/1/2016 7:04:00 AM

great one..congrats

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/1/2016 11:08:00 PM

Thanks for going through and commenting. :) Sunita

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/1/2016 6:36:00 AM

Congratulations Sunita on POTD honors...

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/1/2016 11:07:00 PM

Thanks a lot for reading and your nice comment. I'm so glad it was retained as POTD. :) Sunita

Daniel Turner

Date: 8/1/2016 6:22:00 AM

Back to say Congratulations Sunita for POTD. Very well deserved:)

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/1/2016 11:06:00 PM

Thanks Daniel, I'm glad the poem is appreciated. Thanks again for your nice comments. :) Sunita

Jan Allison

Date: 8/1/2016 6:04:00 AM

well written Sunita and congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/1/2016 11:04:00 PM

Wow Thanks so much for reading. I'm glad the form turned out good, 1st attempt. :) Sunita

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/31/2016 6:07:00 PM

Very good write Sunita. Our emotions are never honored by destiny. Wish you best for contest

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/31/2016 11:06:00 PM

Ya and at times so difficult to accept...Thanks Anisha for reading. Love Sunita :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/31/2016 11:34:00 AM

Love builds and Love destroys in so many ways...great write...is it God or is it US...god bless...^WW^

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/31/2016 11:04:00 PM

I do agree, once I used to think having love reciprocated is a boon but when this is achieved and there's lost, you are just held in an emotional block thinking what went wrong? Thanks for going through and your comment. :)Sunita

Sandra Haight

Date: 7/31/2016 10:53:00 AM

So emotionally expressed in your well-written Quatern with the repetitive line that questions the 'why', Sunita. I wish you all the best for the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/31/2016 11:01:00 PM

I'm so glad the form turned out to be good and the poem is appreciated, I had some difficulty keeping 8 syllables per line and I'm glad it conveys the message. Thanks Sandra for reading and for your nice comment. :) Sunita

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/30/2016 6:59:00 PM

Sadly, I think both a game of God AND way of life. Nice way to do the contest, Sunita.

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/30/2016 11:24:00 PM

Ya true...thanks for your support and encouragement with ever kind words. God bless you and all the best. Love Sunita :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/30/2016 4:03:00 PM

Looks good and reads good. I think it's excellent, Sunita. good luck in contest.

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/30/2016 11:22:00 PM

Oh I'm relieved that it is appreciated and thanks for going through and to the PS for guidance with forms explanation. :) Sunita

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 7/30/2016 12:05:00 PM

Hi, friends, I have tried the Quartern for the first time. I would be glad to have your suggestions. Thanks. Sunita