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Maureen McGreavy's 'Ice Saccades' the inspiration for this senryu

Not Circadian

Doctor, my
 
   'Saccadian rhythms'

        Eyes, not ears...
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Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 29, 2019 at 6:37 AM
Cute! Delighted to inspire! Vestibular-from Latin vestibule, ears and eyes the entrance to the brain; apparently, correcting Saccades will affect correction of balance issues in the ears too, and vice versa, all connected. Isn't everything? ;) xomo <3
Wolf Avatar
April 29, 2019 at 9:13 AM
Yes! Everything is connected; everything comes full circle... And thank you for the 'edumucation!' ~ Grinning in Chicago
Krutsinger Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 4:10 PM
My circadian rhythms are much more concerning to my doctor, yet, they bother me not a whit.
Wolf Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 8:03 PM
Love your comment. Hilarious! I can just picture the befuddlement overspreading your doctor's face as you tell him how you feel (about your circadian rhythms). ~ gw
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