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Not Broken

Thrown onto the floor.. Maybe cracked but not broken.. Two hands picked it up.. Caressing with care.. Finally mending old scars.. Holding it close with warmth.. A heart now finds love.. Then she handed me her own.. Two hearts become one..

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Mohammad Yamin

Date: 12/13/2012 12:20:00 PM

Amazing Senryu. It has touched my heart. Thanks for visiting my Haiku The Flame and your beautiful comments, Michael. I admire your sensitivity. -Mohammad

Len Gasun

Date: 12/12/2012 10:13:00 AM

Great senryu with its very inspiring and spirit uplifting message! I love it my dear friend! Kudos! Thank you so much for sharing! Advance merry merry Christmas to you and your family! I like your new avatar. love and hugs, Leonora

Shaz Cheesman

Date: 12/11/2012 5:10:00 AM

This is a very touching and gentle but beautiful poem Michael. Love the delicate mending of the heart that then becomes stronger than it ever was :-) could be a fav for me. Shaz x

Kerry Singleton

Date: 12/10/2012 9:04:00 PM

Awwww...so cute! great little write :) MERRY CHRISTMAS (SANTA) Michael...lol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/9/2012 9:39:00 PM

Hi Michael, love is the best feeling that mends and melts like wax... your poem, and feelings are beautiful,.. the image encourages hope, when one feels all broken in the inside...thank you for the uplifting ending...always~ xox~pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2012 8:28:00 PM

One word for this: PRECIOUS. I sure enjoyed the read!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 12/9/2012 8:07:00 PM

This sounds like love. So let it be. Thanks for sharing with us. Lucilla

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 12/9/2012 4:56:00 PM

True love will found each other, nothing could break it down unless the love withdraw the existance it self. Love complete the imperfection, and your verses provoked it as well :)-hug, yanny

Lynette Chachere

Date: 12/9/2012 2:52:00 PM

beautiful message. :) even though there was a fault... these two found each other at the right time. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/9/2012 2:00:00 PM

Nice to read your write on this chilly afternoon. Light & Love

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/9/2012 12:11:00 PM

This is utterly one of the most beautiful writes I've ever read my friend! I really loved reading this illustrious and tremendous poem this afternoon! What a delightful and wondrous piece, Great Work!!