Michael J. Falotico Poet Senryu

Not Broken

Thrown onto the floor..
Maybe cracked but not broken..
Two hands picked it up..

Caressing with care..
Finally mending old scars..
Holding it close with warmth..

A heart now finds love..
Then she handed me her own..
Two hearts become one..

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Mohammad Yamin December 13, 2012 at 12:20 PM Amazing Senryu. It has touched my heart. Thanks for visiting my Haiku The Flame and your beautiful comments, Michael. I admire your sensitivity. -Mohammad

Len Gasun December 12, 2012 at 10:13 AM Great senryu with its very inspiring and spirit uplifting message! I love it my dear friend! Kudos! Thank you so much for sharing! Advance merry merry Christmas to you and your family! I like your new avatar. love and hugs, Leonora

Shaz Cheesman December 11, 2012 at 5:10 AM This is a very touching and gentle but beautiful poem Michael. Love the delicate mending of the heart that then becomes stronger than it ever was :-) could be a fav for me. Shaz x

Kerry Singleton December 10, 2012 at 9:04 PM Awwww...so cute! great little write :) MERRY CHRISTMAS (SANTA) Michael...lol

Poet Destroyer A December 9, 2012 at 9:39 PM Hi Michael, love is the best feeling that mends and melts like wax... your poem, and feelings are beautiful,.. the image encourages hope, when one feels all broken in the inside...thank you for the uplifting ending...always~ xox~pd

Andrea Dietrich December 9, 2012 at 8:28 PM One word for this: PRECIOUS. I sure enjoyed the read!

Lucilla Carrillo December 9, 2012 at 8:07 PM This sounds like love. So let it be. Thanks for sharing with us. Lucilla

Yanny Widjanarko December 9, 2012 at 4:56 PM True love will found each other, nothing could break it down unless the love withdraw the existance it self. Love complete the imperfection, and your verses provoked it as well :)-hug, yanny

Lynette Chachere December 9, 2012 at 2:52 PM beautiful message. :) even though there was a fault... these two found each other at the right time. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Debbie Guzzi December 9, 2012 at 2:00 PM Nice to read your write on this chilly afternoon. Light & Love

Russell Sivey December 9, 2012 at 12:11 PM This is utterly one of the most beautiful writes I've ever read my friend! I really loved reading this illustrious and tremendous poem this afternoon! What a delightful and wondrous piece, Great Work!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 9, 2012 at 10:47 AM Romantic Michael, nice one xx

Wilma Neels December 9, 2012 at 9:38 AM A lovely piece from the heart MJF! Enjoyed this gem of yours. Enjoy what is left of your weekend ;) love & hugs CTH

Holly Moore December 9, 2012 at 9:33 AM This is very beautiful and romantic. I'm glad two hearts became one...Hugs, Holly

Yvette Lisa Ndlovu December 9, 2012 at 9:14 AM Love happy endings:):) How beautiful!

Sukmawati Komala December 9, 2012 at 8:47 AM you light up my night Michael..may all the fabulous day be yours ever...luv and light <3<3<3 SK

Constance La France December 9, 2012 at 8:34 AM Michael, this is utterly so beautiful and romantic, I love it. Constance