Not At All

No hustle
Neither bustle
Just muted rooms
Soundless walls whispering 
Little innocence looms
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Guzzi Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 6:37 AM
Dear new poet friend..the contest requires 5 lines & a correct labeling of the form..please add a line and relabel Verse or Free Verse..a Ballad has a certain meter & syllable count 8/6/8/6 and iambic meter BUT I would not have been picky on the meter..dp try the form its fun. THIS is Verse or Free Verse. Light & Love
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November 30, 2012 at 10:47 AM
Thank you. Let me see...there is no harm in trying.
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