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Not at all

No hustle Neither bustle Just muted rooms Soundless walls whispering Little innocence looms

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/30/2012 6:37:00 AM
Dear new poet friend..the contest requires 5 lines & a correct labeling of the form..please add a line and relabel Verse or Free Verse..a Ballad has a certain meter & syllable count 8/6/8/6 and iambic meter BUT I would not have been picky on the meter..dp try the form its fun. THIS is Verse or Free Verse. Light & Love
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 11/30/2012 10:47:00 AM
Thank you. Let me see...there is no harm in trying.