Not Always a Fan

I’m not always a fan of poetry - if I actually take time to ponder it
- it can be so irritatingly rhymey, kind of fussy and needlessly intricate.

Compare my love to a summer’s day and I’ll probably yawn and walk away.

Take a nuanced look at the transactions of sex and consent,
and as adults, we may wonder where the romance went.

You know, it only happens once in a while,
that someone with wit and individual style
comes along with something to say
and scribbles it down in a poem or play.

Here’s to the creative visionaries,
to Dickinson's unique and dreamy imagery,
to Shakespear’s highly stylized, run-on sentences
that manage to speak to us over the centuries
or challenge our stifled, bourgeoisie banality
like Nabokov’s use of stunning vocabulary.
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Gondolf Avatar
April 12, 2022 at 3:14 PM
Yes, my writing is fussy and irritatingly rhmey. My poetry is sometimes way too intricate, but for me it's this intricacy that makes it challenging. And I'm always up for a challenge. :)
Vionet Avatar
April 22, 2022 at 7:53 AM
I wasn’t talking about YOU, silly. I mean hack poets like ME.
Leffanta Avatar
April 12, 2022 at 11:34 AM
As the Bee Gees sang, "Its only words, and words are all I have to take your heart away" . . . . .
Vionet Avatar
April 12, 2022 at 2:33 PM
Well said Rico
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