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Not about to Fade

Is there a template for feeling old?
a vision of what we would expect?
Should your state of being at eighty be less joyous
or should you present as being derelict?

Why not be gleeful, full of love and laughter
it's a greater state of feeling than remaining bitter
As I have matured , emotionally, physically and mentally 
I have demonstrably in every way become so much fitter

Many a sunset has been viewed
knowing each night as I lay to rest
The sun next day will surely rise
excitedly tomorrow I'll face another quest

There are many moon glow memories 
some are great ,some not so fine
Each and every experience I am surely blessed 
live in the present and life will be sublime

My life upon this planet 
has transformed in many ways
For fifty years now 
I run on many days

Here's a message I deliver, I eat only raw organic fruits nuts and greens
over thirty years ago a decisive choice I made
At almost age of eighty there's no sign yet 
that I'm about to fade

And then somehow my internal dial around the age of sixty
tuned into the frequency of the messages from God
So acutely now I listen to what He has to say
I take notice of the times He gives a gentle prod

Self love, self respect, love thy neighbour 
the most important messages to receive 
The heart the breath is our direct connection from God
Listen to God!  No intermediaries attempting to deceive

In two months I'll complete 
seventy eight rotations around the sun
My advice, never doubt the self 
self belief, then life is full of fun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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May 29, 2026 at 1:17 PM
There is no template, but it is not surprising how many turn to God as they age... You give an insight into your life and how your soul feels and what you feel is right for you... congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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May 29, 2026 at 6:25 PM
Good day Silent One Thank you for the opportunity to express my feelings and also your congratulatory response. When I read the other entries I feel honoured to be highly ranked above the talent in this contest blessings Douglas
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May 26, 2026 at 4:39 AM
Wow that’s amazing! And thank you for sharing your wisdom, Its beautiful to read a poem that flows with light and faith. Diet plays a crucial role yes in maintaining ourselves, Pleasure reading your poem dear DG. Sending you light always
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May 26, 2026 at 3:01 PM
Good day Ink It has always been my objective to share what I have gained from life in the hope that others may benefit . I find poetry a perfect medium for that This contest provided a great opportunity to fulfil my objective. I am really uplifted by your beautiful reply Blessings Douglas
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