Nostalgic Boat Ride

The winter morning as arrived
Bringing misty chillness alive
The chants are loud in the sky
With bells ringing in the temple side
Mesmerizing are the swish
Of the water flowing beneath
As I lay there so calm
Nothing to hurry no qualm

Hear the children in their bath
Splashing water cutting apart
Ladies up carrying water pot
With wet clothes on their shoulder
The ducks family seems to know
They move on they move on

Slowly the boat moves to shore
Showing time to wake and stow
What a blissful night it was
The full moon cascade bright soothing path
It was a meditative drive
Which I carry in my feelings stacked
To be referred in future packed....SUNKAN
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kannan Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 6:32 PM
happy to see you here doris, and thanku for this great welcome i am overwhelmed...sunkan
Kannan Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 6:30 PM
thanku ram yes it is a recollection tranquility...sunkan
Culverhouse Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 5:10 PM
enjoyed reading your work today and welcome to poetry soup!!
Mehta Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 4:21 PM
To be referred in future packed for the recollection tranquility, sundari
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