Nostalgia

Sorrow resonates,
Melancholy of the soul:
Painful memories.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Pickett Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 9:39 AM
Very true.... Good work my friend....:JP]
Jordan Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 7:34 AM
Raul, often times in life our memories end up haunting and tormenting us as the years pass by - as you know I have many such memories of my own - You did an excellent job with this - Thank you so much for feeling my poem was placeable in your contest - I know that was a hard one and I'm very honored - always in my prayers, God Bless you, mj
Sweetheart Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 4:53 AM
Thankxxx Raul for a wonderful contest once again and congrats to all your winners ... u always do an excellent job and your dedication in magnificent ... u extract words from us that otherwise might be lost forever if your challenges did not allow us to dig in and create a poem worthy of the photo.. your dedication to these contest provide us to enhance our creativeness .. thanxxx ..and blessings with luv.... Linda-Marie..
Kendrick Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 4:08 AM
Those memories of regret can haunt us. Thanks for the comments and selecting my Haiku for placement in the contest. The decisions to choose amonst the many posted must have been a difficult one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Foster Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 1:04 AM
This one stirs up a fair bit of emotion...Good work. ...Margaret
Dietrich Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 1:15 PM
I love how the words "sound" in those first two lines. Luv, andrea
Brown Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 12:28 PM
Oh yes I can feel this one. Thank you Raul for sharing today. Love, Carol
Martin Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 10:32 AM
That past resonates in us all.
Goombi Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 10:29 AM
Great senryu, powerful in every way.
Moreno Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 10:22 AM
Nice work......................Danielle
Neal Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 10:20 AM
LOved the middle line. DN
Davis Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 10:18 AM
Nice work, the past is haunting at times.
Richards Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 8:39 AM
Once again, you have captured the feeling. The one thing I've seen more often than not on the soup....is how often each one of us is able to share, and pour out hearts bearing nostalgia in our poetry. There is a healing that comes with those words, I believe. ~ Carrie
Thompson Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 7:42 AM
Dear Raul, I didn’t know that you wrote such beautiful haikus. I have only read Karen’s and Carrie’s haikus so far. All of you seem to be haiku masters, and I hope to learn to write haikus myself. Yours are beautiful, and I can learn a lot from you. Love, Amy.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 5:44 AM
Such magnificent words Raul for your Senryu today .. u can feel the emotion from the content of the poem with a most significant title... enjoyed and a new fav of mine.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Mclaughlin Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 12:17 AM
you say so much in so few words. love it.
Palli Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 11:57 PM
can really feel this one
Chircop Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 11:49 PM
Forget the painful memories...and think of the Sun..Heartfelt Senryu.Charma
Scripca Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 11:30 PM
I am nostalgic too with painful memories...I love to write Haiku's, especially in the traditional 5/7/5 syllable format. Nice haiku, Raul. All the best, Iolanda
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