Notes About The Poem

03.06.2024

Anne-Lise  Andresen 
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- Nostalgia -

                                    Twilight in a silver dream,
                                the tide hour with gentle breeze
                                  Grassy paths trod many times
                                 as pawned my footsteps in dust

                                Remember summer's sweet fruit
                                    with music in the hammock
                                  In a solemn hour for thoughts 
                                - with young eyes another world
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Radice Avatar
July 31, 2024 at 10:24 AM
The title drew me in and I was transported. Atmosphere, imagery and calm oozes from your words Anne-Lise. Cheers - Gary
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July 21, 2024 at 7:50 AM
Anne-Lise I'm trying to get back on track. Not for one moment would i forget to visit your page and comment, but you must have seen that my comments to everyone were sparse, in fact at one stage I was thinking of taking a long sabbatical or leaving as i could not cope with our business which in the order of things must come first as it is our bread and butter. My dear friend I am so sorry. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.
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June 8, 2024 at 2:15 AM
Very soothing poetry Anne
Onclaud Avatar
June 7, 2024 at 9:53 AM
this is sooo inviting, anne.. nice to be back somehow... huggs, nette
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June 6, 2024 at 4:41 AM
Anne-Lise, I love the images conjured by your peaceful and serene lines! Lovely thoughts to contemplate! Happy Thursday xxoo
Roper Avatar
June 4, 2024 at 4:51 PM
To see things with young guys everything is new . enjoyed reading
Greenhough Avatar
June 4, 2024 at 1:59 PM
I enjoy this poem with it's soft memories and a relaxing hammock. Have a lovely, sunny week.
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June 4, 2024 at 2:39 AM
Excellent poem written in tranquillity. Enjoy the short summer, my dear. Hugs.
Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2024 at 6:13 PM
Great reflections on the best time of the year
Alhemaidy Avatar
June 3, 2024 at 4:47 PM
Have very nice summer days! Lovely memories as well!
Cunningham Avatar
June 3, 2024 at 2:15 PM
Happy memories Anne Lise, seems like only yesterday. Tom
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June 3, 2024 at 2:10 PM
Beautiful, poem so peaceful to enhance this image, <3 : )
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June 3, 2024 at 1:38 PM
Absolutely beautiful Sunshine! Debx
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June 3, 2024 at 1:02 PM
Anne-Lise, your engaging poem seems to be reliving a summer past with nostalgia and longing. Your peaceful natural memories, including nightfall, gentle breezes, grassy walks, and juicy fruit are well-depicted.
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