Norwegian Tanka

Norwegian Tanka 

This day had sunlight 
Light shone through small windows
My office was a stable
The beast of burdens´ air reminds me 
That my work is not yet done.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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A   Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 5:50 PM
;-)...pd
Hansen Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 3:55 AM
thanks destroyer
Collins Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 7:55 AM
a simple smile here. love, Kathy
Hansen Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 11:14 AM
thank you Kathy
Andresen Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 6:05 AM
Thank you ... then I learned something new today ...... But tell me .... is there any difference? Your "Norwegian Tanka" is at least well written. Have a great first week in December. oxox / / Anne-Lise ... (Norway) :)
Hansen Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 7:10 AM
No Anne I didn~t get the tanka quite right so I cheated a little by calling it Norwegian tanka
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