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Northern Californian Coastline

Rugged coastline Aqua blue waters Natures marvel One of her daughters Pillars of green Look down on her ocean As her frothy waves caress In graceful motion Sporadic stepping stones Jut from the blue As life clings Before they disappear from view Stand by her shores Please take a bow For under her surface You will be gargling wow! Creatures that have adapted Over millions of years Beauties so lovely But some leave fears Along the Californian Coastline Awesome vistas of view I wish i was there So i could view with you too Written about a picture Caroline Cécile Paczynski kindly emailed me http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/poetry-soup-2.php

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Date: 11/21/2009 5:04:00 PM
Mr. Fraser,...how incredably powerful your poetry is,....I can only imagine your life as you live it day by day,..I pray it is some place betwix Picasso and Pierrre Auguste(Renoir),...two of mine all time favorite imaginatives ! Don't stop sharing mine poetic friend !!!!!! james
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Date: 11/20/2009 10:03:00 AM
Nicely done write. I can see the vista from the poem. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/19/2009 5:19:00 PM
What lovely imagery and flow of this beautiful piece from your pen today.. so enjoyed being caught up in this reading.. luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/19/2009 2:06:00 PM
We often drive the four hours, to the Northern California coast, and yes...the awesome vistas are unlike any other...breathtaking! From the Redwood, to San Francisco is quite beautiful! We are fortunate to be close enough to see it often. ~ Nicely written James. ~ Carrie
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Date: 11/19/2009 1:34:00 PM
A beautiful image you paint here with words. Must have been quite a awesome picture! Love how you brought it to life! I felt like I was there as I was reading it. Thanks for sharing, smile. Keep writing! Have a wonderful Thanksgiving! Love Light Patty
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