James Fraser Poet Rhyme

Northern Californian Coastline

Rugged coastline
Aqua blue waters
Natures marvel
One of her daughters
 
Pillars of green
Look down on her ocean
As her frothy waves caress
In graceful motion
 
Sporadic stepping stones
Jut from the blue
As life clings
Before they disappear from view
 
Stand by her shores
Please take a bow
For under her surface
You will be gargling wow!
 
Creatures that have adapted
Over millions of years
Beauties so lovely
But some leave fears
 
Along the Californian Coastline
Awesome vistas of view
I wish i was there
So i could view with you too


Written about a picture Caroline Cécile Paczynski kindly emailed me



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James Peranteau November 21, 2009 at 5:04 PM Mr. Fraser,...how incredably powerful your poetry is,....I can only imagine your life as you live it day by day,..I pray it is some place betwix Picasso and Pierrre Auguste(Renoir),...two of mine all time favorite imaginatives ! Don't stop sharing mine poetic friend !!!!!! james

Sara Kendrick November 20, 2009 at 10:03 AM Nicely done write. I can see the vista from the poem. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 19, 2009 at 5:19 PM What lovely imagery and flow of this beautiful piece from your pen today.. so enjoyed being caught up in this reading.. luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Carrie Richards November 19, 2009 at 2:06 PM We often drive the four hours, to the Northern California coast, and yes...the awesome vistas are unlike any other...breathtaking! From the Redwood, to San Francisco is quite beautiful! We are fortunate to be close enough to see it often. ~ Nicely written James. ~ Carrie

P Sheart November 19, 2009 at 1:34 PM A beautiful image you paint here with words. Must have been quite a awesome picture! Love how you brought it to life! I felt like I was there as I was reading it. Thanks for sharing, smile. Keep writing! Have a wonderful Thanksgiving! Love Light Patty