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Contest: Personally Speaking, sponsored by Nette Onclaud, Written 11/2/25.

NORTHERN BOREALIS

I am the northern night goddess
As I cast my celestial spell
You may glimpse my aurora at night
My energy hugs the atmosphere
In my ethereal pink costume
With floating rubies and emeralds
Winds tickle my borealis stars
As I float in my beauty all night
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Daniels Avatar
December 6, 2025 at 4:22 PM
Filled with colourful feeling & floating Light of creation, Tania. Quite penetrating ! Xx
Kitchin Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 4:35 AM
Ghairo, thank you.
Crandall Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 7:04 PM
Sounds beautiful - I wish I had got a chance to see the northern lights - no such luck so far!
Kitchin Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 3:10 PM
David, thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 12:01 PM
So beautiful, Tania. Congratulations
Kitchin Avatar
November 6, 2025 at 4:29 PM
Andrea, thank you.
Kauffman Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 10:47 AM
As beautiful as the Aurora herself, Tania. Your poem reflects both the beauty and the energy of the northern lights. Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
Kitchin Avatar
November 6, 2025 at 4:29 PM
Sam, thank you.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 9:29 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely/wonderful "Northern Borealis" write again. Pretty Picture... Hope You Have Autumn Blessings As You Write Away............
Kitchin Avatar
November 6, 2025 at 4:29 PM
Paula, thank you.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 1:11 AM
Hi Tania, lovely poem. Pity I have never seen a northern borealis. It is indeed bewitching.
Kitchin Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 3:25 AM
Victor, thank you.
Rodgers Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 9:53 AM
Dear Tania, The line about the winds tickling the borealis stars is a beautiful touch, making the vast atmospheric event feel intimate and playful, even while it's casting a "celestial spell." It's a very evocative and strong piece of personification. Autumn Blessings, Dear Tania, Daniel
Kitchin Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 1:02 PM
Daniel, thank you,
Roper Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 9:32 AM
Yes, you are so beautiful. I have never seen one but would love to. Great personification. Good luck
Kitchin Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 1:02 PM
Eve, thank you.
Andresen Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 11:10 AM
- Yes, you are beautiful ... (I saw you earlier this week in a green dress) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs :)
Kitchin Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 11:22 AM
Anne-Lise, I saw her last year in October, the pic is from that night. Thank you, hugs.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 10:11 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely/wonderful "NORTHERN BOREALIS" write with a great picture. "Good Luck" I did "OH WATERMELON." Hope You Have Autumn Blessings As You Write Away.............
Kitchin Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 11:22 AM
Paula, thank you.
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