Northeasterly Wind

northeasterly wind whips the surf palm tree branches... shore birds catch flight soar

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Date: 9/18/2012 8:27:00 AM

your holiday has inspired some beautiful haiku, Sara - I can imagine you thinking of this one as you were on the golf cart trip

Date: 9/17/2012 10:24:00 PM

Wondrous imagery, Sara. You have to love those shore birds.

Date: 9/16/2012 4:42:00 PM

We have plenty of shore birds, but no palm trees in New Jersey. Good write as usual, Sara.

Date: 9/16/2012 3:28:00 PM

Beautiful description in just a few words

Date: 9/16/2012 12:05:00 PM

I agree, this has very nice imagery within this masterfully written poem! I love this incredible and superior poem! Wonderful Haiku, Great Work!!

Date: 9/16/2012 10:55:00 AM

Very nice haiku here Sara!Great imagery!

Date: 9/16/2012 10:48:00 AM

so descriptive, sara... your wind takes me to new heights!... a fascinating 'ku!.. how's karter?..:) huggs!

Date: 9/16/2012 10:14:00 AM

great imagery in this haiku

Date: 9/16/2012 10:10:00 AM

well written!! enjoyed reading!