Northeasterly Wind

northeasterly wind
whips the surf palm tree branches...
shore birds catch flight soar  
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Horne Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 8:27 AM
your holiday has inspired some beautiful haiku, Sara - I can imagine you thinking of this one as you were on the golf cart trip
Dietrich Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 10:24 PM
Wondrous imagery, Sara. You have to love those shore birds.
Pettit Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 4:42 PM
We have plenty of shore birds, but no palm trees in New Jersey. Good write as usual, Sara.
Nutter Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 3:28 PM
Beautiful description in just a few words
Sivey Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 12:05 PM
I agree, this has very nice imagery within this masterfully written poem! I love this incredible and superior poem! Wonderful Haiku, Great Work!!
Poet Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 10:55 AM
Very nice haiku here Sara!Great imagery!
Onclaud Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 10:48 AM
so descriptive, sara... your wind takes me to new heights!... a fascinating 'ku!.. how's karter?..:) huggs!
Roberts Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 10:14 AM
great imagery in this haiku
Culverhouse Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 10:10 AM
well written!! enjoyed reading!
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