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Santa is NOT here anymore! He shops at the Amazon store There's no need for a sleigh Gave the reindeer away Our elves send a drone to your door!

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Date: 12/5/2018 10:37:00 PM
This is just perfectly done for our times. Even Santa falls victim to technology. Ha, ha. Well-done! Congrats on your win in the contest. ~ Gershon
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Date: 12/4/2018 5:04:00 PM
Perfectly penned!! ;D
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Date: 12/2/2018 7:37:00 PM
Awesome Rico! And soon to be true as well..lol Congrats on your win...Charlie
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Date: 12/2/2018 4:20:00 PM
An absolute Gem Rico!:-) I really loved this one:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/2/2018 2:35:00 PM
Sounds about right! Congrats, Rico!
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Date: 12/2/2018 2:03:00 PM
Very cute, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/2/2018 1:09:00 PM
hahahaha.... this is a wonderful well written poem, Rico, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/2/2018 11:35:00 AM
Absolutely hilarious, Rico, and written with perfect rhyme and syllable counts. Please keep the drones from my door! Congratulations on second place. This contest was fiercely competitive and judging was quite the challenge. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 11/29/2018 11:40:00 PM
G'day Rico … a look into the future. You've just frightened the life out of many kids - thanks Rico - Lindsay
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 11/30/2018 1:07:00 PM
Today's kids don't care who brings the goodies as long as they get more than their share! Aloha! Rico
Date: 11/29/2018 11:15:00 PM
such absolutely true words Rico, children stop believing in santa from their nursery school years, i'm sure a lot of them shop with their parents online at Amazon. No need anymore to leave Santa hot Cocoa and biscuits, where he left a touch of his beard and a half crunched biscuit because he was in a hurry, and no getting stuck in chimneys anymore ! Ricky believed in Santa till he was about 8 years old. but drones will make a good substitute, especially if they bring presents! Yasou, Jennifer.
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 11/30/2018 1:06:00 PM
Unfortunately, criminals now use drones to filch packages from doorways, steal pets, bicycles, and other backyard possessions, etc. The bad guys always see opportunity before the good guys who believe opportunity is still around the corner! Aloha! Rico

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