North For the Winter?

We took a vacation way up North in the dead of winter
“You’re going the wrong way”, all would say thinking our minds must have splintered.
It was hard to find a room to rent within the Arctic circus
But one we did find with a hot tub outside to suit our final purpose.

Wearing only a robe and boots of skin with a bottle of wine in hand
To the hot tub we ran in minus degrees disrobing before we jumped in.
We poured our glasses of red cabernet and clinked them together so slight,
As we settled in in the dark of the day waiting for the Aurora Borealis display of light.

Visions of light; red, blue and green, dancing a spectacle we’d never seen 
While ice crystals formed on our lashes.
Out on the horizon up through the heavens,
One after another most vibrant of flashes.

For hours we sat in the hot water vat
Staring in utter delight
Never a sight had we seen so beautifully obscene
As the dance of the Northern Lights.


Entry in the Viva Vacation contest.
9th Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 29, 2012 at 8:46 AM
congrats on your featured poem of the week
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March 28, 2012 at 5:51 PM
Congrats Joe on "North For The Winter?" being featured.
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March 28, 2012 at 6:31 AM
Congratulations on your premium featured write this week Joe. Love, Carol
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March 27, 2012 at 8:00 AM
nice poem and congrats on feature...Patrick
Austin Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 3:22 PM
Just went to the thermostat, Joe, and turned up the heat so I could enjoy your borealis. Congrats on the selection. Enjoyed. daver
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May 21, 2010 at 5:48 AM
Congratulations Joe on your win in the contest "Viva Vacation" sponsored by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
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May 6, 2010 at 9:58 PM
Yes we saw them from North Dakota. Beautiful and Congratulations o your win. Joyce
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May 6, 2010 at 5:20 PM
Congrats Joe on your 9th place win in my Viva Vacation contest.. an amazing write.. appreciate your support.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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