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North By Northwest

(Blank Verse Sonnet) We traded fields of cotton bolls for snows so deep they swallowed house and car alike, so cold a breath transformed to crystal ice, so strong the air became as still as death. A fur-lined boot or glove spared flimsy guard as fingers, toes and nose began to pulse in pain and foster hope to somehow dodge or ease the winter's all-consuming freeze. Yet skin and pores recalled a choking sun and days of sweat beneath its cutthroat burn through cotton rows, its never-ending bite of white-hot scorch and physical malaise. Northern peaks and speckled river trout defeated weather’s aim to drive us south.

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Date: 1/13/2015 4:51:00 AM
Hello again, Cona. This is a fine sonnet that really surprised me because after I read it a couple of times I then noticed that you labeled it a blank verse sonnet. I enjoyed it so much that I didn't notice that it didn't have rhymes. Quite an accomplishment to fool someone who loves the rhyme. I loved the imagery and flow.... Robert.
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Date: 1/8/2015 10:16:00 AM
You are a very discipline poet to be able to compose a sonnet so effectively. I will never be a master of tight verse.
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Cona Adams
Date: 1/13/2015 9:10:00 AM
The "snake" poem is titled "Of Lust and Dissipation" - posted 11/4/2014. The same poem, written in a Quatrain, is titled, "Misguided Passion," - posted 9/5/2014. Billy Gillman is the young boy who became an overnight sensation, with the song, "One Voice."
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Cona Adams
Date: 1/13/2015 8:53:00 AM
9/3/2014 It's "Tongue in Cheek" humor. My instructor did not appreciate it.
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Bill Yates
Date: 1/8/2015 12:32:00 PM
Can you give me a date posted so I can find it easier?
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Cona Adams
Date: 1/8/2015 11:43:00 AM
Never say never. Believe me, I sweated blood and tears learning to write sonnets. If you read, "A Sonnet Is A Poem?" you will understand. I also wrote one about a snake falling in love with a garden hose (inspired by Billy Gilman's song) and MY teacher commented that she wished that I would find a more serious subject for my sonnets. : )

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