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Noralynn

No other woman is better than her; Since anyone further below by her; Every man can make a distinction of her attraction; And the lover puts her through great devotion; She brings her voice sweet music to someone's ears; She sparks her eyes that guys stand into peers; Her brown skin presents beauty and elegance; Her long black hair neatly and beautifully made for balance; Natural grace shows her in the form of slimness; And favorable attitude makes her the benefit of sweetness.

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Date: 3/21/2016 9:59:00 PM
Arvin, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/15/2016 8:33:00 PM
Arvin, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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Date: 1/12/2011 6:35:00 AM
I am having a contest to HIGHLIGHT poets from outside the USA called Foreign Exchange, please add your talent to the writes. Place your best poem & on the bottom put the country where you now live. Thank you! Light & Love
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Date: 1/4/2011 5:35:00 AM
This poem I made 11 yrs. ago, deeply madly and truly in love with that woman who is then a skinny and catwalk type of girl.
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Date: 6/9/2010 12:35:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Family.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight... with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/8/2010 5:49:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Arvin. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2010 5:46:00 AM
My goodness! Who is that lady? She certainly sounds fabulous, like someone who is normally seen in a magazine. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph
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