None Forgave

won't retreat                        
                                    some with shoes, some bare feet
                               the last bridge to Manassas we'll find

                as tired soldiers struggle through night's cold darkness blind
                             after burying dead in shallow pits behind
                              silence moves forward, our souls to save

                                      this bridge shall  find our grave
                                                 none forgave




5/13/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 2:17 PM
thanks for the comment on my comment..pd
Onclaud Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 11:44 AM
this little slice of a world of human struggle amazes, frederic.. warm congrats on your shining win in my challenge..huggs
Parker Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 5:18 PM
thank you nette and thank you for introducing me to the world of Trois Par Huit, I found it interesting
A   Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 6:39 PM
Hi Frederic,, Congratulations, in Nette's "TROIS PAR HUIT A BRIDGE contest." always~ Linda
Parker Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 5:18 PM
thank you Linda
Kendrick Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 5:01 AM
Very expressive work..Enjoyed reading your contest winner..Way to go..Congrats..Sara
Parker Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 12:23 PM
thank you Sara for reading and your kind response
Lawless Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 6:50 PM
A winning poem and an historical vignette. Nicely done in a difficult form.
Parker Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 12:22 PM
thank you John for reading and your kind response
Gorelick Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 2:03 PM
A great piece and a great win. congrats. BG
Parker Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 2:28 PM
thank you Barbara for reading and your kind response
Callus Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 1:21 PM
Congratulations, Frederic! Strong write which I can understand but cannot relate to personally. Let the brave always be remembered! // paul
Parker Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 2:27 PM
thank you Paul for reading and your kind response
Gruhn Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 4:37 PM
Thanks Frederic, if you get a moment please take a look at my poem "I Do Fear Nothing", Take care my brother. Robert Gruhn
Gruhn Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 9:40 PM
been there, done that, nice piece
Parker Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 4:15 PM
yeah, I know what you mean, USN CVA66
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