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None Forgave

won't retreat some with shoes, some bare feet the last bridge to Manassas we'll find as tired soldiers struggle through night's cold darkness blind after burying dead in shallow pits behind silence moves forward, our souls to save this bridge shall find our grave none forgave 5/13/14

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Date: 6/8/2014 2:17:00 PM
thanks for the comment on my comment..pd
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Date: 5/31/2014 11:44:00 AM
this little slice of a world of human struggle amazes, frederic.. warm congrats on your shining win in my challenge..huggs
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/31/2014 5:18:00 PM
thank you nette and thank you for introducing me to the world of Trois Par Huit, I found it interesting
Date: 5/29/2014 6:39:00 PM
Hi Frederic,, Congratulations, in Nette's "TROIS PAR HUIT A BRIDGE contest." always~ Linda
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/31/2014 5:18:00 PM
thank you Linda
Date: 5/29/2014 5:01:00 AM
Very expressive work..Enjoyed reading your contest winner..Way to go..Congrats..Sara
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/29/2014 12:23:00 PM
thank you Sara for reading and your kind response
Date: 5/28/2014 6:50:00 PM
A winning poem and an historical vignette. Nicely done in a difficult form.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/29/2014 12:22:00 PM
thank you John for reading and your kind response
Date: 5/28/2014 2:03:00 PM
A great piece and a great win. congrats. BG
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/28/2014 2:28:00 PM
thank you Barbara for reading and your kind response
Date: 5/28/2014 1:21:00 PM
Congratulations, Frederic! Strong write which I can understand but cannot relate to personally. Let the brave always be remembered! // paul
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/28/2014 2:27:00 PM
thank you Paul for reading and your kind response
Date: 5/14/2014 4:37:00 PM
Thanks Frederic, if you get a moment please take a look at my poem "I Do Fear Nothing", Take care my brother. Robert Gruhn
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Date: 5/13/2014 9:40:00 PM
been there, done that, nice piece
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/14/2014 4:15:00 PM
yeah, I know what you mean, USN CVA66

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