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None But You

i've been bathing in the cascade of love's abyss- ravishing in barren moments that ignite my intimate desires rinse me and dry me with crimson cloth, so that i may be redeemed by your fount's reverie the constellations knew your captivating touch would quench my thirst, nourish my need to love none but- YOU the universe gave a path for you to wander sweetheart ~for you are truly spectacular~ you are my stardust at midnight, my perpetual reason for breathing i inhale your hunger for me- you exhale the truth i decree for there are no syllables, no metaphors to embrace without you in my world- i sought for a love that could fill my essence with devotion, and you my love, satisfy my every aspiration if you wish to be my dream, if you yearn for me as i do for you, then come here- DEMAND my KISS and we shall LOVE until the grains no longer fill an hourglass our love is i r r e f u t a b l e, your beauty is exceptional; my restless heart full of none...but- YOU ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ January 8, 2020

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Date: 1/9/2020 7:28:00 PM
this is gorgeous my wonderful friend... i can see why this placed so high...congratulations on your win :) hugs
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Date: 1/9/2020 4:44:00 PM
Lu Loo, congrats on your win for this scintillating and amorous write. I love the inhale/exhale couplet. Keep writing, I always look forward to your works ~ John
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Date: 1/9/2020 1:14:00 PM
Beautifully written Laura and I keep amazing you? Lol girl your words are forever amazing me!;) congratulations on your win!;)
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Date: 1/9/2020 1:30:00 PM
you're silly - - - we have similar styles and I can relate to every poem you write. The loss and love - all beautifully expressed. thank you sweet lady x:-)-luloo
Date: 1/9/2020 1:13:00 PM
Hi LuLoo, Congratulations on your win with this very creative piece that juxtaposes the breath and height of love with the universe - nice metaphor.
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Date: 1/9/2020 1:29:00 PM
aww thanks dear Sam! x:-)-luloo

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