No-Name No: 1

I'm lost
a deer at night
in front of headlights
when conversation stopped
you would pause and that was all.
you deserve a round of applause
made me forget where I was!
oh yeah,  i couldn't budge
i needed you like a drug. 
you did too sometimes
because you wanted to get high
can I curl your toes tonight
and breath more tonight?
i'm recovering
with you still above me
taking up my thoughts,
my time,
you are seductively drugging me.

-don't you leave me
-please
-don't you leave me!
-I didn't mean a word I just said
-please girl, 
-believe me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Farley Iv Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 9:24 PM
Thank you! I appreciated the feedback and I hope you're celebrating life.
Andresen Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 3:19 PM
Always good to be two. Take care of love. Like your poem - it's well written. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 11, 2012 at 10:12 PM
I really enjoyed this one! Nice seeing a new face. (well, new to ME anyway).
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