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Non Traditional Haiku -Beneath


                 beneath 
a green veil
     tree branches
   hold tight a stone-
                   nature reclaims

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January 05, 2022 

Poetry/non traditional haiku/beneath
Copyright Protected, ID 01-1419-241-05
All Rights Reserved, 2022,  Constance La France


Submitted to the Standard contest, A Strand (1046)
sponsor,  Brian Strand, Judged 01/06/2022

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kauffman Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 10:01 AM
Constance, this is a show stopper. Wonderfully done. Congratulations on your win. Sending you joy and gladness in this new year dear friend!
La France Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 5:40 PM
Sam, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Bowden Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 11:32 PM
I’ve never written a haiku but I shall now. Congrats on your win.
La France Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 5:41 PM
Craig, thanks for the comment, and the congrat, happy to inspire ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Horne Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 5:33 AM
love this & it so completely describes the pic x
La France Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 9:12 AM
Jack, thank you so much for the visit and compliment ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 2:54 PM
That pic! Oh my! …tree branches hold tight a stone
La France Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 3:44 PM
Kim, thanks for the visit and oh yes that image is amazing ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Allison Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 2:48 PM
Excellent ink constance and the pic is amazing:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 3:45 PM
Jan, thanks for the compliment on my poem and pic, hugs ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Andresen Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 1:01 PM
- .. no need to look for the roots :) - A great one, Constance :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 3:45 PM
Anne-Lise, thanks for the compliment and encouragement, hugs ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Leffanta Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 11:00 AM
Nothing like "Roots" . . . .Aloha!
La France Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 3:46 PM
Rico, thanks for the visit ~friendship and poetry _Constance
Lawless Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 9:57 AM
and so it does Constance.....a vivid moment accentuated by the picture.
La France Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 3:47 PM
John, yes, nature will always reclaim in time, thanks for the compliment, yes, it is a great image ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
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