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Noises In the Morning

scritter scitch scitter scitch dog’s tapping down the hallway to breakfast crinkle criggle crink opening the cereal whirr whirr whirr juicer is working hump thump bump cat throws herself against door, reminding us to feed her bird speak greets me tweet peep ticky ticky ticky slee shee slee shee caw caw robins, cardinals, and now a crow ra tat ra tat woodpecker gets in on the act ur ur ur ur oooooooohhhhhh neighbor’s rooster zzzz zzzz zzzz I close the door quickly, a wasp!

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/16/2021 5:49:00 PM

What a sound track, Caren. Those hills in the sound of Music have nothing on you! ~ MGM, gw

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2021 1:05:00 AM

Thank you Gershon.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2021 3:20:00 PM

lots of fun noises!! The ending is really clever!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2021 1:05:00 AM

And I drowned that wasp after dousing him with gallons of wasp spray which did not kill it.

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 8/16/2021 10:00:00 AM

Except for a few noisy crows and songbirds rehearsing full throated, I like my mornings quiet – it's when I do a good deal of my writing, otherwise, though rare, it's late at night. All those rhetorical sounds in your poem would drive me crazy. / Maurice

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2021 1:06:00 AM

There is sound everywhere here. I know because I have dog ears.

Jcb Brul

Date: 8/16/2021 9:46:00 AM

Haha..Nice one! I find myself reciting aloud at 1:46 AM (Korean Standard Time) Your poems are always delightful treats!!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2021 1:06:00 AM

Thank you my friend! I appreciate it.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/16/2021 8:47:00 AM

(chuckle) I call this my morning symphony, Caren. I wear hearing aids, so after I put them in, it becomes a cacaphony!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/16/2021 9:01:00 AM

I imagine it is immediately LOUD when you do.