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Noise In Her Mind

Noise in her Mind I know her so well she came long ago to visit my being we share beauty and bedlam boudoir and kindest of spirits She walks like a cat woman hears like a bat feeds birds quietly she soothes thunder’s volcano howls with the wolves Klimt’s Kiss Vermeer’s Girl With Pearl Earring Botticelli’s Venus Degas’s Dancer In Repose Fedro’s Much Better With Age she absorbs pastel and paint strokes symphonies on canvas so many facets big bangs and roaring giggling convulsions Sometimes Woman Laughing from Goya’s dark paintings a Broken Column like Kahlo’s when some Munch’s Scream invades and infests silence deep inside her beautiful scull Voices shout from profuse directions focus condense and refract confront tease torment disagree and interfere with calm serene serenades when a few notes tender chords and accord vanish into cacophonies misleading the song I know her so well admire her resilience and how she copes with the noise the disruption and the ballet of so many different views pandemonious clangour onslaught of turmoil as she appears calm on the surface orchestrates quiet composure How she holds it all together I cannot really fathom with all that jumbling distance so close and yet so far from my innocent mind My Venus Of Milo has taught me so much most of it all and over above that imperfection is a wonderful gift and very complete

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Date: 4/11/2017 12:28:00 AM
Hi Kai, I always enjoy your abstract way with words and have to look hard to find the obscure meaning and a joy to find. I see you love a good painting and then you make a delicious mix of noise to go with it. Hope you are keeping the fort on your side of the river
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/11/2017 6:08:00 AM
The fort is fine and so is the river. And I only hear the noise by proxy...Thank Jannie...
Date: 4/2/2017 11:26:00 AM
Incredible ink
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/11/2017 6:07:00 AM
Thank you. I appreciate that, Kai
Date: 3/15/2017 2:49:00 PM
This is quite a unique take on the 'noise' theme, Kai. Excellent interpretation of overall content, while displaying a good knowledge of art/artists. Full marks to you. Regards // paul
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/16/2017 1:32:00 AM
Thank you Paul. I appreciate that lots. For the sensitive ones, noise starts a very low frequencies. Take care, Kai
Date: 3/15/2017 10:19:00 AM
You have swept me up and away with this piece Kai! A student and lover of art and an especially Kahlo fan and lover of poetry I praise you and thank you for this gorgeous piece, a 7 and a fave xomo
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/16/2017 6:41:00 AM
I am forever a student of life, but technically I'm an art school drop out, fell into dead end job I loved for 20yrs: bike courier, am a seizing the day always. Bless! xomo
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/16/2017 1:30:00 AM
Thank you Maureen. What are you studying? I did medicine, psychology and a tiny bit of philosophy. Noe I am just writing and seizing the day. Many wishes, Kai

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