Noise

You yelled and screamed but all I heard was noise, because you didn't take the time to speak. 9-19-17 Alexis Y.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/29/2017 8:25:00 PM

Oh.. that is so true. People do yell and scream, don;t talk and don't take the time to speak. have a nice evening my friend.

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 9/25/2017 8:47:00 AM

AMEN!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/24/2017 1:59:00 PM

For sure! Screaming complicates the argument. It can never be solved unless peace prevails. I prayed peace over my home several years ago. It has stayed.

Barry Stebbings

Date: 9/21/2017 5:02:00 PM

I know exactly what you mean, Alexis. The problem is that some people think that volume overcomes reason. // Barry

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/19/2017 8:21:00 PM

I understand what you mean. Good point in this Monoku, Alexis :)

Tim Smith

Date: 9/19/2017 4:35:00 PM

I hear exactly what you are saying

Silent One

Date: 9/19/2017 3:29:00 PM

Awesome this one! When people raise their voice or you see rage in their eyes and body language, you dont really listen to what they say, because when someone is angry they dont really say what they mean.. Nice on Alexis

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 9/19/2017 2:48:00 PM

Nice. Spot. On. Super fave! xomo:)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/19/2017 2:44:00 PM

I think many can relate Alexis and people also hear but they aren't really listening:-( hugs jan xx