Noise

You yelled and screamed but all I heard was noise, because you didn't take the time to speak.






9-19-17
Alexis Y.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

October 29, 2017 at 8:25 PM

Oh.. that is so true. People do yell and scream, don;t talk and don't take the time to speak. have a nice evening my friend.

Lim'Rik Flats

September 25, 2017 at 8:47 AM

AMEN!

Kim Rodrigues

September 24, 2017 at 1:59 PM

For sure! Screaming complicates the argument. It can never be solved unless peace prevails. I prayed peace over my home several years ago. It has stayed.

Barry Stebbings

September 21, 2017 at 5:02 PM

I know exactly what you mean, Alexis. The problem is that some people think that volume overcomes reason. // Barry

Heidi Sands

September 19, 2017 at 8:21 PM

I understand what you mean. Good point in this Monoku, Alexis :)

Tim Smith

September 19, 2017 at 4:35 PM

I hear exactly what you are saying

Silent One

September 19, 2017 at 3:29 PM

Awesome this one! When people raise their voice or you see rage in their eyes and body language, you dont really listen to what they say, because when someone is angry they dont really say what they mean.. Nice on Alexis