Noise

Annoying screams on repeat, I want peace; but the noise is in my~mind


















Alexis Y.
09-23-2023

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Kim Rodrigues

September 24, 2023 at 5:10 AM

When it’s in your mind, it is hard to shut it up! Well done!

John Lawless

September 23, 2023 at 4:58 PM

Kinda like the Grinch on Christmas day...Oh the noise, noise, noise, noise....

Andrea Dietrich

September 23, 2023 at 10:09 AM

sounds beyond annoying, good entry

Heidi Sands

September 23, 2023 at 7:58 AM

Great monoku. Yes, the noise can stay in the mind. Well done Alexis :)

Jan Allison

September 23, 2023 at 7:06 AM

i can relate big time:-) hugs Jan xx

Silent One

September 23, 2023 at 6:57 AM

I hope you find your peace.. It can be difficult sometimes... Especially with so much unwanted noise around.. Great one liner Alexis.

Ink Empress

September 23, 2023 at 6:57 AM

I know this feeling so well, sometimes we long for silence, but voices in our head, seems to get louder as silence surrounds us! Profound deep and moving line! That conveys so much in few words! I alwys admire that! A monoku that delivers so much! Brilliant