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Noise

Annoying screams on repeat, I want peace; but the noise is in my~mind Alexis Y. 09-23-2023

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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/24/2023 5:10:00 AM
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When it’s in your mind, it is hard to shut it up! Well done!
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John Lawless
Date: 9/23/2023 4:58:00 PM
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Kinda like the Grinch on Christmas day...Oh the noise, noise, noise, noise....
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/23/2023 10:09:00 AM
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sounds beyond annoying, good entry
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/23/2023 7:58:00 AM
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Great monoku. Yes, the noise can stay in the mind. Well done Alexis :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/23/2023 7:06:00 AM
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i can relate big time:-) hugs Jan xx
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/23/2023 6:57:00 AM
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I know this feeling so well, sometimes we long for silence, but voices in our head, seems to get louder as silence surrounds us! Profound deep and moving line! That conveys so much in few words! I alwys admire that! A monoku that delivers so much! Brilliant
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Silent One
Date: 9/23/2023 6:57:00 AM
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I hope you find your peace.. It can be difficult sometimes... Especially with so much unwanted noise around.. Great one liner Alexis.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/23/2023 6:49:00 AM
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I just a few words how cleverly you conveyed the feelings annoyed by the noises that roil life. A message so well delivered--it hits the mark.
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/23/2023 6:36:00 AM
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Can't escape our mind. I listen to soothing up building music in the morning to start my day. Powerful monoku
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Deb M
Date: 9/23/2023 6:22:00 AM
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Oh Alexis l can so relate! So well said! Debx
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