Noise

Annoying screams on repeat, I want peace; but the noise is in my~mind


















Alexis Y.
09-23-2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 9/24/2023 5:10:00 AM
When it’s in your mind, it is hard to shut it up! Well done!
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Date: 9/23/2023 4:58:00 PM
Kinda like the Grinch on Christmas day...Oh the noise, noise, noise, noise....
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Date: 9/23/2023 10:09:00 AM
sounds beyond annoying, good entry
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Date: 9/23/2023 7:58:00 AM
Great monoku. Yes, the noise can stay in the mind. Well done Alexis :)
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Date: 9/23/2023 7:06:00 AM
i can relate big time:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/23/2023 6:57:00 AM
I know this feeling so well, sometimes we long for silence, but voices in our head, seems to get louder as silence surrounds us! Profound deep and moving line! That conveys so much in few words! I alwys admire that! A monoku that delivers so much! Brilliant
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Date: 9/23/2023 6:57:00 AM
I hope you find your peace.. It can be difficult sometimes... Especially with so much unwanted noise around.. Great one liner Alexis.
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Date: 9/23/2023 6:49:00 AM
I just a few words how cleverly you conveyed the feelings annoyed by the noises that roil life. A message so well delivered--it hits the mark.
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Date: 9/23/2023 6:36:00 AM
Can't escape our mind. I listen to soothing up building music in the morning to start my day. Powerful monoku
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Date: 9/23/2023 6:22:00 AM
Oh Alexis l can so relate! So well said! Debx
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