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NOEL

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ midnight frost whispers, shepherds gasp—sky torn by gold~ a cry melts the dark
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Gauthier Avatar
December 6, 2025 at 6:39 PM
"a cry melts the dark" is lovely imagery
Hind Avatar
December 2, 2025 at 7:02 PM
So delicate. So beautiful!! <3
Kendrick Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 4:10 AM
Ahh!! He was willing and He was able to come to earth to save anyone who is willing to come and say forgive me for I am a sinner. He became vulnerable so we could be salvaged. Sara K
Buhagiar Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 2:08 AM
You evoke great sentiments. Loved this poem.
Rolland Avatar
November 30, 2025 at 6:50 AM
impressive poetry, celebration counts, thanks poet
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