Nocturnes a Freed Verse

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

NOCTURNES
the
unquiet
 street
of
autumn haze

illicit
  circumstance
an
idealistic
  illusion
a paradox
 made manifest
in
precise in
precepts
 of
intention
concentrated
  attention
in
straddled
 objectives

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