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Nocturne

Cats on moonlit roofs, Stilled, watching the city sleep, Fireflies in their eyes.

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 2/10/2023 6:59:00 AM

Wonderful image. A memorable Haiku indeed. Cheers, Brian

J.W. Earnings

Date: 8/2/2019 6:17:00 AM

Marvelous poem! Thank you for sharing and I enjoyed reading tonight. -JWE

Bernard Chan
Date: 8/2/2019 8:54:00 PM

Thanks a lot, J.W. Appreciated.

Warren Doll

Date: 6/14/2019 4:55:00 PM

A serene and well composed haiku. The cats are taking in all the beauty of the night with their superior night vision. Unique imagery, Bernard. A fav for me. All the best~ Warren

Bernard Chan
Date: 6/14/2019 11:17:00 PM

Thank you so much, Warren. Appreciated.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/9/2019 4:23:00 AM

Beautifully penned; great imagery.

Bernard Chan
Date: 5/10/2019 9:23:00 PM

Thank you very much, M.L.

W.A. Cholt

Date: 5/8/2019 6:45:00 PM

A lovely picture.

Bernard Chan
Date: 5/10/2019 9:21:00 PM

Thank you, W.A.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/8/2019 2:41:00 PM

Hello Bernard, Oh ... such a lovely poem. Have a nice day my friend.

Bernard Chan
Date: 5/10/2019 9:20:00 PM

Thank you very much, Darlene.

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/8/2019 10:50:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, Bernard. Love it.

Bernard Chan
Date: 5/10/2019 9:19:00 PM

Thanks a lot, Line.