Nocturne

Cats on moonlit roofs, Stilled, watching the city sleep, Fireflies in their eyes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Sambourne Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 6:59 AM
Wonderful image. A memorable Haiku indeed. Cheers, Brian
Breidenthal Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 6:17 AM
Marvelous poem! Thank you for sharing and I enjoyed reading tonight. -JWE
Chan Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 8:54 PM
Thanks a lot, J.W. Appreciated.
Doll Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 4:55 PM
A serene and well composed haiku. The cats are taking in all the beauty of the night with their superior night vision. Unique imagery, Bernard. A fav for me. All the best~ Warren
Chan Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 11:17 PM
Thank you so much, Warren. Appreciated.
Kiser Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 4:23 AM
Beautifully penned; great imagery.
Chan Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 9:23 PM
Thank you very much, M.L.
Cholt Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 6:45 PM
A lovely picture.
Chan Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 9:21 PM
Thank you, W.A.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 2:41 PM
Hello Bernard, Oh ... such a lovely poem. Have a nice day my friend.
Chan Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 9:20 PM
Thank you very much, Darlene.
Gauthier Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 10:50 AM
Beautiful imagery, Bernard. Love it.
Chan Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 9:19 PM
Thanks a lot, Line.
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