Nocturnal Retreat

nocturnal retreat

mauve tackles midnight
 lavender echoes whisper ~
  song of the rooster

curly coral clouds
 dressed in a burnished bronze blush ~
  ebony snoozes

round rosiness yawns
 in wispy gossamer hush ~
  the sweet scent of pink

puffy plumes of gold
 like lush heavenly spindrift ~
  nocturnal retreat

6/6/23
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Kendrick Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 7:28 AM
I like these very descriptive and color laden lines penned in the Haiku form. Thanks for sharing them with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
Kauffman Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 10:57 AM
Hi Sara, dawn truly has a wonderful palette of colors that, for me, drip from each moment of the sunrise. It was fun to try and paint that exquisiteness in words. Thanks for sharing this sunrise experience with me and for your lovely message. I don't see many sunrises, being a night owl, but when I do I am in awe of their exceptional beauty. Blessings and prayers.
Poet Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 12:03 PM
Sam, your poem was truly impressive. The vivid imagery you conveyed through your eloquent language was nothing short of remarkable. I extend my sincerest congratulations on your well-deserved win in the contest.
Kauffman Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 10:53 AM
Thank you so much dear friend. Sunrises, in my mind, speak eloquently of beauty born in new light with amazing colors and hopefulness. Thank you so much for affirming my efforts to capture this fleeting eloquence. Your perceptive eye and heart see beauty in a very special way that you express in your poems. Sending you blessings with each dawn!!
Daniel Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 3:55 AM
Astounding, Sam, congratulations:)
Kauffman Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 9:35 AM
Thank you so much Jo! As the darkness of night retreats, daybreak puts on quite a show, even for a night owl like me! Sending you blessings!
Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 1:12 PM
gorgeous images, Sam!
Kauffman Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 4:09 PM
Andrea, thank you so much! Sunrises are so inspiring. Blessings to you! Had fun playing with words for this string.
Ricci Avatar
June 7, 2023 at 3:17 AM
Hello Sam. Good Morning. Your title caught my eye with the word nocturnal. I have been a creature of the night and your entry did not disappoint. You leave us with marvelous colorful imagery. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Take Care. (smile)
Kauffman Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 10:56 AM
Thank you Lisa! Like you, I love the nighttime and write about night often when there is palpable peace and soothing quiet except for a little traffic noise or the sound of a lonely train whistle. Thank you for sharing in this time of dreams. I am so glad that this poem spoke to your love of night - truly a mutual admiration society! Sending you blessings under the stars and moon. All the best!
M  Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 11:06 PM
Lovely worded imagery Sam….it made me feel relaxed! Beautiful…..Debx
Kauffman Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 10:51 AM
Thank you so much Deb! One of the reasons I love writing haiku is the opportunity to develop new imagery! So glad you enjoyed my endeavor. Here's to quiet midnights and peaceful dawns! Blessings!
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