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Nocturnal Radiance

Ballet of shadows,
Oscillating with the breeze:
Lantern in the sky.

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Petra Mallett

December 3, 2009 at 8:46 PM

this paints a very pretty picture. Thanks for the view.

James Fraser

November 25, 2009 at 3:02 PM

Beautiful Haiku Raul, gorgeous images >> James

November 24, 2009 at 1:37 PM

Wonderful picture your paint with words! Such a creative view. You are so good at haiku. I hope you are exploring publication in some of the haiku publications. I am just learning the form and feel honored that you selected my poem as one of your winners. Thank you so much. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving! Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 23, 2009 at 4:24 PM

By the looks of the brilliant poems I am reading it looks like you all have new ink pens. I wish you all a wonderful week filled with love and inspiration. Happy Thanksgiving to all that celebrate. Love, Carol

Charmaine Chircop

November 23, 2009 at 8:10 AM

That moon lightning up the sky.shadowing,dancing in the breeze.......beautiful scene Raul..romantic indeed-Charma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 23, 2009 at 5:01 AM

This haiku is perfect... and your title is unique... excellent write, Raul.. please re send your Soup Mail to me.. thankxxx.. Luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Doris Culverhouse

November 22, 2009 at 6:32 PM

pretty, enjoyed reading.

Daniel Corcoran

November 22, 2009 at 2:21 PM

a great haiku raul. its incredible how 3 lines can be more descriptive than a whole book.

Audrey Haick

November 22, 2009 at 1:22 PM

Masterful Haiku, Raul! As usual, picture-perfect! Happy Thnxgiving! Peace and love, Audrey

Carrie Richards

November 22, 2009 at 1:03 PM

This is such a breathtaking poem,....you are the master of the haiku! ~ Love, Carrie

Elizabeth Neal

November 22, 2009 at 12:48 PM

Soup mail...

Elizabeth Neal

November 22, 2009 at 12:48 PM

Beautiful haiku, loved this. Love Elizabeth

Chris Goombi

November 22, 2009 at 12:46 PM

The first line is a great opening, this haiku entails great description of a lovely night. CG

Steve Edmonds

November 22, 2009 at 12:39 PM

Oscillating shadows, great imagery! Shadows do dance from the waving light from a lantern. This piece is so simple, but rather fascinating under close examination. Your haiku's go way beneath the surface. One can learn so much from your work. You are a great asset to the Soup and to world of poetry. God bless.