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Nocturnal Radiance

Ballet of shadows, Oscillating with the breeze: Lantern in the sky.

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Petra Mallett

Date: 12/3/2009 8:46:00 PM

this paints a very pretty picture. Thanks for the view.

James Fraser

Date: 11/25/2009 3:02:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku Raul, gorgeous images >> James

Date: 11/24/2009 1:37:00 PM

Wonderful picture your paint with words! Such a creative view. You are so good at haiku. I hope you are exploring publication in some of the haiku publications. I am just learning the form and feel honored that you selected my poem as one of your winners. Thank you so much. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving! Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/23/2009 4:24:00 PM

By the looks of the brilliant poems I am reading it looks like you all have new ink pens. I wish you all a wonderful week filled with love and inspiration. Happy Thanksgiving to all that celebrate. Love, Carol

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/23/2009 8:10:00 AM

That moon lightning up the sky.shadowing,dancing in the breeze.......beautiful scene Raul..romantic indeed-Charma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/23/2009 5:01:00 AM

This haiku is perfect... and your title is unique... excellent write, Raul.. please re send your Soup Mail to me.. thankxxx.. Luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/22/2009 6:32:00 PM

pretty, enjoyed reading.

Daniel Corcoran

Date: 11/22/2009 2:21:00 PM

a great haiku raul. its incredible how 3 lines can be more descriptive than a whole book.

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/22/2009 1:22:00 PM

Masterful Haiku, Raul! As usual, picture-perfect! Happy Thnxgiving! Peace and love, Audrey

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/22/2009 1:03:00 PM

This is such a breathtaking poem,....you are the master of the haiku! ~ Love, Carrie

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 11/22/2009 12:48:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, loved this. Love Elizabeth

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 11/22/2009 12:48:00 PM

Soup mail...

Chris Goombi

Date: 11/22/2009 12:46:00 PM

The first line is a great opening, this haiku entails great description of a lovely night. CG

Steve Edmonds

Date: 11/22/2009 12:39:00 PM

Oscillating shadows, great imagery! Shadows do dance from the waving light from a lantern. This piece is so simple, but rather fascinating under close examination. Your haiku's go way beneath the surface. One can learn so much from your work. You are a great asset to the Soup and to world of poetry. God bless.

Tyler Martin

Date: 11/22/2009 12:34:00 PM

Nice work, never thought of the moon being a lantern in the sky. Tyler

Daniel Neal

Date: 11/22/2009 12:31:00 PM

You haven't lost your touch, beautiful work as always. DN