Nocturnal Foxes

screams pierce the night primeval mating wise owls winking

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/30/2023 12:29:00 PM

Pivotal and starkly beautiful, I like it .

Peter Rees
Date: 1/31/2023 4:00:00 AM

Thanks for your visit to my site. So glad you enjoyed my foxes poem. I enjoy the discipline of Haiku and the need to condense meaning into very few words.

Sally Eslinger

Date: 1/30/2023 10:28:00 AM

Wow! A brilliant piece! I meet you in this work & happily so. It’s a fav & now im a follower. This Aha! Moment will last in me! Your new poet sister, sally

Peter Rees
Date: 1/31/2023 3:57:00 AM

Hi Sister Sally, so glad you like my Foxes poem and a big thank you for faveing it. Nice to meet up with you.

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/30/2023 9:33:00 AM

Yep, the owl is always watching, starling us into the open. Sort of like a letter from the IRS. Love it! A lot said with few words. You get a FAVE from me!

Peter Rees
Date: 1/31/2023 4:03:00 AM

Many thanks for your visit Joe and in particular for faveing my foxes poem. Yes, few words, but that’s one of the challenges with haiku, to condense meaning into just three short lines.

Deb M

Date: 1/30/2023 5:10:00 AM

Peter are you talking about my scream dream hehe!! Great poem just love the first line…Debx

Peter Rees
Date: 1/30/2023 7:53:00 AM

Your scream dream may well have contributed Deb, so thanks for that. My poem slightly amended.

Maria Mitea

Date: 1/28/2023 10:59:00 AM

Great One!

Peter Rees
Date: 1/29/2023 1:19:00 AM

Thank you Maria. I’m pleased you enjoyed.