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Nocturnal Eminence

Warrior to dark's most daunting dreams savior from thoughts that run too deep Terrify, not one dares it seems brings panacea to night's sleep Beacon for flailing ships asea, the Ana of fifty shades Grey Beauty saving the nocturne beast keeps subconscious demons at bay Catches every breath with her smile as summer's sun, a heart it warms Intensity not seen awhile quells the worst of fierce thunderstorms Her touch, akin to the spring's rain gently blooming buds to flowers Still, mental images are vain ne'er experience her powers Shan't romance, seduce, love, or hold hear her voice, feel her aura's beams Suppose I could, though not so bold so she must stay within my dreams

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Jannie Breedt

Date: 1/5/2017 3:34:00 AM

Hi Keith, nice to see some talent around here. I appreciate the work you put in here and it turned out a superb piece of art.

Keith Osborne
Date: 1/5/2017 7:53:00 PM

Thank you Jannie. I was hoping that the amount that I toiled with this wouldn't show. I am not sure how to respond to such words as 'talent', 'superb', and 'art' when describing my work. I think that I may have blushed when I read that. Thank you for your compliments.

Moon Flower

Date: 9/27/2016 2:53:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Keith. :)

Keith Osborne
Date: 9/27/2016 4:53:00 AM

Thank you. I hope that it was an enjoyable read. I am hoping to post more soon.

Skat A

Date: 9/26/2016 2:45:00 PM

Keith, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Keith Osborne
Date: 9/26/2016 4:14:00 PM

Well hello SKAT, thank you for the wonderful greeting. I find myself a little overwhelmed with the site at the moment. I don't even think that I am able to figure out how to become your 'friend', or I would straight away. I am mostly just a dabbler in poetry. What would you like to know about me? I look forward to reading your work, as well as getting to know you SKAT. -peace Keith