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Nocturnal Cherry Blossoms...

the ripple on the sparrow pond flickers the sliver moon’s reflecting light as the frogs croak to one another in the warm air of the spring night and on the newly planted field a light blue fog hangs near the ground and by morning, the cherry trees will blossom as that time of year has come back around

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/27/2009 6:25:00 AM
I almost missed this,,,your words, sparrow pond, planted field,,blue fog, they go deep inside me. I really enjoy your writing.
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Date: 4/26/2009 8:14:00 PM
So inviting as this write. A wonderful read
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Date: 4/26/2009 8:08:00 PM
I love this kind of poem. It paints the picture so well. Blue fog...terrific words. Bg
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Date: 4/26/2009 7:49:00 PM
Love the anticipation of the trees in bloom. You set the stage very well with the images of the mon on the pond, the sounds of the frogs and the magical "blue fog." Very nice, Luke! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/26/2009 7:40:00 PM
I love the softness, the gentleness of this sweet poem! Lovely! ~ Best Wishes, Carrie
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