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Nocturnal

Blind to the dark
     circles full moon
          watches in orbit

Aimless rotation
     choice or direction
          revolves around pattern

Leathery wings
     visionless radar
          faceless intuition

Howls in a distant
     barbarian expanse
          alert olive eyes

Kindly conjunction
     shared perception
          silent awareness

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Triversen,
June 10, 2017 
Copyright © Darren White
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Wolf Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 1:07 AM
I've read this 5 times now and I'm not finished reading it! Wolf likes very much! Haha! Crane Bag ~~~/|\~~~
White Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 1:19 AM
I knew you'd like it :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 11, 2017 at 9:13 PM
I love this Darren.
White Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 1:13 AM
Thanks mo, glad you like it.
Williams Avatar
June 11, 2017 at 7:57 AM
I love your poem Darren, the whole theme set to the amazing music, lends itself to be read and read again....Impressive !!...Maria
White Avatar
June 11, 2017 at 8:34 AM
Love it that you love it. Thank you my friend :)
Quest Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 7:23 PM
Very nice, I love the second stanza :) *Tom Alan Quest*
White Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 7:41 PM
Thank you, I am glad you like it!
Sands Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 1:08 PM
Wow , this is so nice Darren. I was pulled right into the poem as I was reading it :)
White Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 1:42 PM
Thanks Heidi :)
Smith Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 12:54 PM
A beautiful poem my friend
White Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 1:43 PM
Thanks Tim :)
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