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Nobody Came

The mist ooozed
the echo to one way.
It was so dark and dank
my breath stank, impaled
by will–o'–the–wisp
mirage, flickering
candle-like, remote.

Ghosts-like swirls arose
through the mist, but nobody
came.
Silence pierced and
popped up, but nobody
came.
Storm abated, flood
flee flouted, but nobody
came.

I lay damp and dying, crying
for having lied about where I was going — 
fault and blame, and never knowing
lay beside me, nobody
came.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Burroughs Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 6:06 AM
How do you add audio to your poem?
Kimathi Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 1:01 PM
Your poem pulsates with imagery, even after reading it! :-)
Anderson Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 1:26 PM
Thanks for your nice response, Cheers
Van As Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 8:12 AM
I just love your poetry. Reading it gives me a entirely new perspective of what words can do to a person. Brilliant!
Anderson Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 12:19 PM
WOW - thanks for your reply. Cheers
Roper Avatar
August 12, 2017 at 8:55 AM
Deep write, John, enjoyed reading this morning ~*
Anderson Avatar
August 12, 2017 at 12:28 PM
Thanks very much for your comment. Best Wishes
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