Prasad Korade Poet Free verse

Nobody

Nobody….
  
       Nobody will see
       what good you do,
       but everybody will observe
      where you go wrong

                                                Nobody will see
                                               what efforts you make
                                               but everybody will observe
                                              where you get the success from

       people around you
       will be jealous with your sincerity
       They will have hundreds of questions 
       and always demand to prove your ability.

                                             Mistakes will be captured 
                                             more  than the efforts which are sincere 
                                            wrong things will be highlighted more 
                                            than the right things done ever.

       People around you 
       Will be eager to pull you down
      They'll prove themself to be more better 
        And more capable to wear the winning crown
    
                                                 Very few people will notice
                                                 where you bring the correct things from
                                                 but everybody will observe
                                                 where you go wrong.            


                     
 Thanks and regards,
Prasad Korade

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Poet Destroyer A October 27, 2013 at 10:15 AM Prasad, ... Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. It was nice seeing it on the Poetry Soup-- HOME PAGE. Always a poetry soup friend <3 = LINDA

Skat A October 27, 2013 at 1:30 AM Prasad, CONGRATULATIONS ;) on having your poem featured................... LOVE SKAT

Ravindra K Kapoor October 18, 2013 at 1:26 PM Welcome Prasad on this beautiful site, where you would find lots of wonderful Poet friends. Your first Poem has an appealing simplicity. My best wishes for some good poetry and your long stay. ...Ravindra

Shail Sarwade October 11, 2013 at 12:43 AM God is always with you... Have a faith & trust on him.... His eyes are on you ...... Shail

Anne-Lise Andresen October 9, 2013 at 3:50 AM Welcome to P-Soup, Prasad ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A October 8, 2013 at 9:22 PM Prasad, I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A October 8, 2013 at 7:08 PM Hi Prasad, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT