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Noah Counting Love

. I woke this morning yes this morning and felt the warmth of love ‘pon mine forehead and my face and my ears and my nose I woke this morning yes this morning and heard the warmth of love close to mine forehead and my face and my ears and my nose I woke this morning yes this morning and heard his words of love “Don’t worry Pops I washed my fingers before I counted the wrinkles on your forehead your face your ears and your nose"

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 2/25/2015 7:40:00 AM

Dear Sir James, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. I have traveled a long way since last we spoke. My ink well is full, I have plenty of Parchment, but my mind is empty. How is Noah? I share in YOUR joy of having a son so Loving, that he washed his fingers before counting so as not to smudge a single earned wrinkle. I have missed the Soup a lot. I just recently celebrated 2 years of sobriety life changed for the better. LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER your Liege...HG

James Peranteau
Date: 12/16/2023 2:34:00 AM

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Kp Nunez

Date: 2/16/2015 11:34:00 PM

Sweet...love, rhythm and rhyme just flowed from your pen. Made me smile, made me laugh, made me think of children's innocence for awhile...Definitely a 7. More smiles from the land of sunshine and thousand isles. :D Kim

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/16/2015 10:24:00 AM

Very nice pen James! I really enjoyed reading this piece, my dear friend. Very sweet. A 7 from me! I wish you a very wonderful day! In his light! God bless you! :) D.