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No Wonderland Winter

(just felt like doing it "blues" style!) Snowflakes/Snow Snow Snow falling on my “pane” first snowflakes of the season. . . and more on the way Snowball a tiny snowball once it gets started rolling. . . it’s all-consuming Jack Frost near frosty windows beaming carolers smiling. . . but they don’t know jack Snow Angel lying in cold snow arms out, moving up and down. . . signaling angels For SKAT's Snow themed Contest

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Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 12:25:00 PM

you know my sis and I ran these haiku to piss the haiku wannabe kings and queen. skat

Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 12:24:00 PM

loving these again

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 12/17/2010 2:13:00 PM

Was just reading some winners and this one was terrific Andrea.A well deserved 1st place win.Your friend Teresa

Brandee Augustus

Date: 12/13/2010 1:29:00 PM

I like how you almost seperated winter into four seasons itself. It nicely explains a winter that alot of people don't get when living in a place with no snow. You don't fantasize it yet you can take something good out of the way you word it. Congratuations on getting the first place position. It's well deserved.

Rinki Nandy

Date: 12/8/2010 11:45:00 AM

Congratulations Andrea. Jack Forst was interesting.

Francine Roberts

Date: 12/5/2010 10:47:00 AM

wonderful, love it , congrats on your first place win

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/5/2010 6:19:00 AM

YES!!! love your big win here, andrea!CHEERS..nette

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 12/5/2010 4:16:00 AM

Cöngratulation on your deserved win. .haiku lady.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/4/2010 4:19:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea. Love Jack's stanza esp.!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/4/2010 8:38:00 AM

Congrats on your win on the contest. God Bless Phyl

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 12/4/2010 4:51:00 AM

A great win, congrats...

Linda Milgate

Date: 12/3/2010 7:22:00 PM

Great win. Well done as usual!

De R

Date: 12/3/2010 2:52:00 AM

Big big congrats on your win, sweetie! Like always, a wonderful poem here! Hugs, Emilia:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/2/2010 4:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/2/2010 3:15:00 PM

Congrats on your 1st place win!!!!!!!

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 12/2/2010 2:50:00 PM

Jack Frost is the best. Great punchline! Thanks as always and regards from Gerard to a great poetess!

Skat A

Date: 12/2/2010 9:35:00 AM

YES! ANDREA, VERY AWESOME, LOVE IT,,luv~SKAT

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/2/2010 8:37:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Andrea

John Freeman

Date: 12/2/2010 8:22:00 AM

Congratulations Andrea on your first place. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/2/2010 8:06:00 AM

You must have posted this gem while I was immersed in football, Andrea. So glad I saw it now. All of the poems are great and I love best the one about the carolers who "don't know Jack." Very witty play on words. Love, Carolyn

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 12/2/2010 7:48:00 AM

Bravo on your first place win, awesome set:)

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/2/2010 7:31:00 AM

So clever are you Andrea!!! Congratulations on another great win!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/2/2010 7:21:00 AM

Andrea, again ) Congratulations! With your awesome entry! Enjoyed the chills here in this snowy contest,...p.d.

Tahera Mannan

Date: 12/2/2010 6:31:00 AM

Oh What a wonderful piece Andrea. Many congratulations for this win.

Joy Wellington

Date: 12/2/2010 5:52:00 AM

Congrats Andrea, a well deserved win. Wanted to enter my two poems on snow but couldn't figure out how to do so, but now I know I could have done it this way. Blessings, Joy (Jew)