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No Wonderland Winter

(just felt like doing it "blues" style!) Snowflakes/Snow Snow Snow falling on my “pane” first snowflakes of the season. . . and more on the way Snowball a tiny snowball once it gets started rolling. . . it’s all-consuming Jack Frost near frosty windows beaming carolers smiling. . . but they don’t know jack Snow Angel lying in cold snow arms out, moving up and down. . . signaling angels For SKAT's Snow themed Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/16/2015 12:25:00 PM
you know my sis and I ran these haiku to piss the haiku wannabe kings and queen. skat
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Date: 5/16/2015 12:24:00 PM
loving these again
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Date: 12/17/2010 2:13:00 PM
Was just reading some winners and this one was terrific Andrea.A well deserved 1st place win.Your friend Teresa
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Date: 12/13/2010 1:29:00 PM
I like how you almost seperated winter into four seasons itself. It nicely explains a winter that alot of people don't get when living in a place with no snow. You don't fantasize it yet you can take something good out of the way you word it. Congratuations on getting the first place position. It's well deserved.
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Date: 12/8/2010 11:45:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea. Jack Forst was interesting.
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Date: 12/5/2010 10:47:00 AM
wonderful, love it , congrats on your first place win
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Date: 12/5/2010 6:19:00 AM
YES!!! love your big win here, andrea!CHEERS..nette
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Date: 12/5/2010 4:16:00 AM
Cöngratulation on your deserved win. .haiku lady.
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Date: 12/4/2010 4:19:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea. Love Jack's stanza esp.!
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Date: 12/4/2010 8:38:00 AM
Congrats on your win on the contest. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 12/4/2010 4:51:00 AM
A great win, congrats...
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Date: 12/3/2010 7:22:00 PM
Great win. Well done as usual!
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Date: 12/3/2010 2:52:00 AM
Big big congrats on your win, sweetie! Like always, a wonderful poem here! Hugs, Emilia:)
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Date: 12/2/2010 4:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara
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Date: 12/2/2010 3:15:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win!!!!!!!
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Date: 12/2/2010 2:50:00 PM
Jack Frost is the best. Great punchline! Thanks as always and regards from Gerard to a great poetess!
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Date: 12/2/2010 9:35:00 AM
YES! ANDREA, VERY AWESOME, LOVE IT,,luv~SKAT
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Date: 12/2/2010 8:37:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Andrea
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Date: 12/2/2010 8:22:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your first place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/2/2010 8:06:00 AM
You must have posted this gem while I was immersed in football, Andrea. So glad I saw it now. All of the poems are great and I love best the one about the carolers who "don't know Jack." Very witty play on words. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/2/2010 7:48:00 AM
Bravo on your first place win, awesome set:)
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Date: 12/2/2010 7:31:00 AM
So clever are you Andrea!!! Congratulations on another great win!!
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Date: 12/2/2010 7:21:00 AM
Andrea, again ) Congratulations! With your awesome entry! Enjoyed the chills here in this snowy contest,...p.d.
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Date: 12/2/2010 6:31:00 AM
Oh What a wonderful piece Andrea. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 12/2/2010 5:52:00 AM
Congrats Andrea, a well deserved win. Wanted to enter my two poems on snow but couldn't figure out how to do so, but now I know I could have done it this way. Blessings, Joy (Jew)
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