No Win

My tennis court sits at the back of my plot; I want to be good, so play quite a lot. The net I’ve repaired, with string and a knot. I’ve painted the lines. (Last year I forgot.) I mow off the grass and sweep up the grot; then carefully smooth a troublesome spot. I practice at dusk, I practice at dawn; I play every day right here on my lawn. I volley and smash, I serve with top spin. It's oh, such a shame, I just cannot win! ~
For Joe Flach's 'I Just Can't Win' Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Austin Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 8:58 AM
Sounds like you cannot lose. Love it. Congrats. daver
A   Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 10:27 PM
Charles, congratulations In Joe's contest. Nice to see this contest finally up ;-) Good night PD
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
July 4, 2012 at 12:28 PM
Congrats on your wonderful win, Charles! You may not ever win at tennis but poetry is another story! Great write. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Brown Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 1:08 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "I Just Can't Win" contest Charles. Love, Carol
Harrington Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 1:02 PM
Congrats! A wonderful write. All that work-for not. :) Tanya
Tsiluma Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 4:00 AM
Hey Charles! I like how you've described the pains leading upto the game(practicing, repairs,preparations) - and not being able to win. Congrats!
Williams Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 1:33 AM
Charles congrats on your win..David
Taylor Avatar
July 2, 2012 at 8:18 PM
Congrats, Charles. Excellent. Great job. Kudos. Ralph
Johnson Avatar
July 2, 2012 at 5:21 PM
At tennis maybe, but you have proof you can win at writing poetry. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Salama  Avatar
July 2, 2012 at 5:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Charles! :)
Collins Avatar
May 25, 2012 at 10:12 AM
ha ha ha! I love it.
Brown Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 8:05 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Charles and I wish you the best in the contest. Hope you have a great day. Love, Carol
Clive Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 8:41 AM
Dear Carol, you are always so generous with your kind wishes. They are very much appreciated. Thank you, Charles.
Williams Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 3:10 AM
Charles a great entree, good luck..David
Clive Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 3:12 AM
Many thanks, David. Fingers crossed! Charles
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