No Win

My tennis court sits at the back of my plot; I want to be good, so play quite a lot. The net I’ve repaired, with string and a knot. I’ve painted the lines. (Last year I forgot.) I mow off the grass and sweep up the grot; then carefully smooth a troublesome spot. I practice at dusk, I practice at dawn; I play every day right here on my lawn. I volley and smash, I serve with top spin. It's oh, such a shame, I just cannot win! ~
For Joe Flach's 'I Just Can't Win' Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/14/2014 8:58:00 AM
Sounds like you cannot lose. Love it. Congrats. daver
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Date: 7/7/2012 10:27:00 PM
Charles, congratulations In Joe's contest. Nice to see this contest finally up ;-) Good night PD
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Date: 7/4/2012 12:28:00 PM
Congrats on your wonderful win, Charles! You may not ever win at tennis but poetry is another story! Great write. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 7/3/2012 1:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "I Just Can't Win" contest Charles. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/3/2012 1:02:00 PM
Congrats! A wonderful write. All that work-for not. :) Tanya
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Date: 7/3/2012 4:00:00 AM
Hey Charles! I like how you've described the pains leading upto the game(practicing, repairs,preparations) - and not being able to win. Congrats!
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Date: 7/3/2012 1:33:00 AM
Charles congrats on your win..David
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Date: 7/2/2012 8:18:00 PM
Congrats, Charles. Excellent. Great job. Kudos. Ralph
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Date: 7/2/2012 5:21:00 PM
At tennis maybe, but you have proof you can win at writing poetry. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/2/2012 5:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Charles! :)
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Date: 5/25/2012 10:12:00 AM
ha ha ha! I love it.
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Date: 5/9/2012 8:05:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Charles and I wish you the best in the contest. Hope you have a great day. Love, Carol
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Charles Clive
Date: 5/9/2012 8:41:00 AM
Dear Carol, you are always so generous with your kind wishes. They are very much appreciated. Thank you, Charles.
Date: 5/9/2012 3:10:00 AM
Charles a great entree, good luck..David
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Charles Clive
Date: 5/9/2012 3:12:00 AM
Many thanks, David. Fingers crossed! Charles
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