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The Beginning of man, Gods great creation , The dawn of dominance , And expectation , The beautiful earth , With infinite skies , Gods greatest gift ? Or destruction in disguise ? For man strives for power , Using any means , An assaulting nature , Of human beings , The end will soon be here, When all beings die , Water will stop flowing , And darkness will fill the sky.

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Date: 12/7/2014 7:53:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Mark - I choose your first great and well written free verse - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/1/2014 9:36:00 PM
Mark, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 12/1/2014 2:05:00 AM
Great work mate and I can relate to what you say. cheers Kev
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Mark Crone
Date: 12/1/2014 2:49:00 AM
Thanks Kev , this is the first time I have posted anything I actually wrote that 30 years ago LOL, it was my first attempt at poetry

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