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No Way Out

Tree branches cover my veiw of a moon lit sky, A cold foggy mist layers the ground, I see theres wind, I hear no sound, My heart beating in my chest is the only thing being so loud, I need to stay strong, So I can fix all that feels so wrong, breathing would help me stay calm, But my mind feels boxed in, here I have no freinds, here is a dark place, Im still in Gods good grace, So the sun came up for me that very next day. Scott S.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/4/2011 12:36:00 PM
You have talent as a poet. Keep writting everyday :) I like your style. & i believe this is a free verse poem.
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Date: 6/1/2011 4:17:00 PM
I agree you are in God's good grace. You are good and your soul will shine. Life cannot be wrong. You will find your way out.
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Date: 5/31/2011 10:10:00 PM
i like this poem :) i feel what you are saying, like i understand it
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Date: 5/29/2011 9:01:00 PM
I like it ,, introspective ;}
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Date: 5/29/2011 8:03:00 PM
Scott, a very well donr poem... something to pounder on when it comes to lost emotions. the grace will always be sweet.. enjoyed,..Take care,..p.d.
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