No Way Out

Tree branches cover my veiw of a moon lit sky,
         A cold foggy mist layers the ground,
         I see theres wind, I hear no sound,
       My heart beating in my chest is the only thing 
      being so loud, I need to stay strong, So I  can fix all 
   that feels so wrong, breathing would help me stay calm, 
But my mind feels boxed in, here I have no freinds, here is a dark
 place, Im still in Gods good grace, So the sun came up for me 
that very next day. 

                                                                      Scott S.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Plotczyk Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 12:36 PM
You have talent as a poet. Keep writting everyday :) I like your style. & i believe this is a free verse poem.
Fringe Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 4:17 PM
I agree you are in God's good grace. You are good and your soul will shine. Life cannot be wrong. You will find your way out.
Duncan Avatar
May 29, 2011 at 9:01 PM
I like it ,, introspective ;}
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May 29, 2011 at 8:03 PM
Scott, a very well donr poem... something to pounder on when it comes to lost emotions. the grace will always be sweet.. enjoyed,..Take care,..p.d.
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