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the pleasure of sin the pain of penance all across the earth's surface permanent tenants

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/25/2022 2:02:00 AM

Oh wow! I had to read this three times. It is so well done.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/25/2022 6:51:00 PM

Took me three times as well tonight. Thanks, Caren.

Susan Lawrence

Date: 1/15/2022 3:13:00 PM

Deep and profound in its brevity . Powerful ! Happy new year . Susan :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/15/2022 8:29:00 PM

Very nice of you to visit and write such a lovely comment, Susan. Best of 2022 to you and yours. Excelsior!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/15/2022 12:05:00 AM

The dividing line between right and wrong. Our choice! So much said in a few words, Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/15/2022 8:21:00 PM

Few words, because I have a small vocabulary... Thanks, Jennifer.

Anselmo Boles

Date: 1/14/2022 4:27:00 PM

The imperfections of man noted. Praise!...ab

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/15/2022 8:15:00 PM

We can always come back from the depths, should we choose to do so. ~ Free Choice and Determination, gw

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 1/14/2022 6:35:00 AM

So much said in so few words!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/15/2022 8:12:00 PM

I like 'em short. Glad you do too, Seeker. Light and Love, Gershon

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/13/2022 9:55:00 PM

I needed to read this twice for it to sink in Gershon. Very clever! Blessings xxoo

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/15/2022 8:10:00 PM

Glad it 'sank in,' Connie. So much of what I say and write merely 'sinks!' (Then again, I could have added a 't' to that word as well). At any rate, thank you for your encouraging words, and hope all is well with you! :) gw