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NO U The more I get to know U The more I want to show U Promises made In the shade Of our desire There was so much fire The more I get to know U The more I want to show U A fleeting glimpse Of that promise Made in our desire Move it up a notch higher The more I get to know U The more I want to show U Depth Breadth Wisdom’s woes The more it shows I’m glad I got to know U Now I can’t do without U

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Date: 5/28/2018 8:49:00 AM
Amazing style and way with words..powerful and genuine. Thanks for sharing this masterpiece. -JWE
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Patricia Leduc
Date: 5/28/2018 9:01:00 AM
Thank you so much !
Date: 4/28/2018 12:43:00 AM
A darling poem, Patricia. Well done.
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Patricia Leduc
Date: 4/28/2018 2:18:00 AM
Thank you for your gracious comments and encouragement

Book: Shattered Sighs