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No Threat To Miss Muffet

no web spun spider tart tongue aimlessly flicking ~ licked, lacking bulls-eye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 2/8/2021 1:46:00 PM
Great word play at the end. I enjoy small poems based off nursery rhymes.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/8/2021 8:54:00 PM
Well, I guess I wrote this one to order: Small poem, and based off nursery rhymes. I'll keep that in mind, Andrea. ~ Chef Gershon
Date: 2/8/2021 5:15:00 AM
So she didn't run away after all. great senryu. Gershon.
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Date: 2/8/2021 3:22:00 AM
An alliterative senryu, rare and lovely!
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