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No Surrender

Slowly crawling out from under the covers 
Ice cold, thinking about our days as lovers 
I had to let you go, I was so afraid of me 
I didn't stop loving you, I set you free 

I miss the look of surrender in your eyes 
You gave a world to me, I now despise 
That no longer can I taste passionate flavor 
Upon crimson lips that once i could savor 

Tired of lying, had to walk out the door 
What once was easy was now a chore 
I stepped out from deep inside my mind 
Times were crazy, you were one of a kind 

But ships have to sail, and stones do sink 
You were not good for me, that I do think 
Walking away from the eyes of a hurricane 
Leaving a love that made me go insane 

I'm wrapped up, I'm bundled, tied in a knot 
Trying to escape a lover, I have not forgot 
Torn and twisted you were a devil in disguise 
I'm missing the taste of surrender in your thighs

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 3/2/2015 12:38:00 AM Congrats on big win CT,, AWESOME !! Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 3/1/2015 7:57:00 PM C.T., CONGRATS on your win. ThanXs for supporting my contest ~ SKAT ~ Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/2/2014 8:55:00 AM :) LINDA Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/2/2014 8:45:00 AM No it does not matter, to answer your question...Linda Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/2/2014 8:44:00 AM Hi C & T, thank you for the reply Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 8/17/2014 4:56:00 PM way to go you two fabulous to see this as poem of the day my friends:-) Hugs Jan xxx Login to Reply Ct Duet Date: 8/17/2014 6:56:00 PM Thank you Jan......big smile and hugs Tim

Christine Costello Date: 8/17/2014 10:29:00 AM very nice collaboration-love the imagery. Congrats :-)Christine Login to Reply Ct Duet Date: 8/17/2014 6:54:00 PM Thank you Christine from Casarah and me...hugs Tim

Race Benoit Date: 8/17/2014 8:46:00 AM Excellent poetry, and I agree with Robert, it could have been the poem of the week. One phrase comes to me which made the leaving profound. "Tired of lying, had to walk out the door / What once was easy was now a chore. Again.Excellent!! Login to Reply Ct Duet Date: 8/17/2014 6:52:00 PM Thank you Race...it is much appreciated....Casarah & Tim

Robert Lindley Date: 8/17/2014 8:17:00 AM Truly an amazing write. Could easily be Poem of the Week in my opinion.. Huge congrats, a team that shines ever so brightly!! Login to Reply Ct Duet Date: 8/17/2014 6:51:00 PM Thanks Robert from both Casarah and me....Tim....I think POD is my poem...lol

Eileen Manassian Date: 8/17/2014 6:41:00 AM Hmmmmmmm....surrender in eyes and thighs...sweet indeed. Surrender is sweet...so is victory. Each has its time and its flavor to relish. This was a great collab by the two of you. You make one hell of a team. Congrats of POTD. Login to Reply Ct Duet Date: 8/17/2014 6:50:00 PM We had so much fun Eileen...We all would love to surrender to someone....hugs

Verlena S. Walker Date: 8/17/2014 2:29:00 AM Well done CT... Congrats! on the poem of the day... Verlena Login to Reply Ct Duet Date: 8/17/2014 6:48:00 PM Thank you very much Verlena !!

Regina Mcintosh Date: 8/17/2014 12:01:00 AM I enjoyed this... you're very talented. God bless you both. Happy writing and love & prayers.... Gina Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 8/17/2014 1:24:00 AM Thank you Regina from both Casarah and myself...hugs Tim

Peter Dome Date: 8/16/2014 8:40:00 AM Boy this is incredible. well done both of you. Some wonderful but sad lines I can relate too. your talent shines through.Felt it in my heart, that's what great poetry is all about. best wishes. Pete. Login to Reply Ct Duet Date: 8/16/2014 10:56:00 PM Thank you my friend from both Casarah and myself...cheers Tim

Jan Allison Date: 8/16/2014 5:06:00 AM WOW Tim and Cas what a deep passionate write that is tinged with a sad undercurrent and has some incredible imagery! Hugs Jan xxx Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 8/16/2014 3:11:00 PM She can go on any time she likes...I think it is difficult with her internet...Tim Tim Smith Date: 8/16/2014 8:08:00 AM Thanks Jan....It was a fun to do together....hugs Tim

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 8/16/2014 12:06:00 AM Wow CT its a real passionate one, although sad, N a longing to surrender, hv a great day! Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 8/16/2014 8:06:00 AM Thank you....You have a great day as well....hugs

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/15/2014 9:30:00 PM Who is this??? LOL.... C or T... :) Linda Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/16/2014 10:43:00 AM Darren and I had access to the account so we could both comment Cas - you could do the same:-) Hugs jan xxx Tim Smith Date: 8/16/2014 8:06:00 AM Yes your smile is delightful :) Casarah Nance Date: 8/16/2014 6:48:00 AM would it matter ? :) Tim does the comments on the duet account btw. but you do have a nice smile ;)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/15/2014 9:02:00 PM WOW,, so sweet and romantic. Sad, to set a feeling and taste like this free.... I see why it would be hard to forget... Enjoyed...Linda Login to Reply Ct Duet Date: 8/15/2014 9:22:00 PM Thank You Linda...some things are harder to forget than others...Like your beautiful smile :)