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No Surrender

I thought that you may be the knight The colors waved seemed true I let down the fortress around my heart On a black steed you rode through Not a damsel in distress My world was pure and good No need for any rescue I knew just where I stood The many colors you displayed Were from damsels before me The lance you carry pierced their hearts But I refused to see The fortress before was so secure No chance of penetration The knowledge that I learned before Protecting my heart’s foundation The damage that’s been done here May never be repaired There may be to much carnage From the short time you were there I will need a deeper moat A wall that can’t be breached For my self preservation For a heart that won’t be reached My heart will not surrender It will stay locked up in the tower Never trusting, never loving Never to be empowered

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/12/2009 8:36:00 AM
Wow-ing!Terrific <3
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Date: 6/6/2009 11:54:00 AM
this poem was fill with feelings keep it up
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