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No Spare Room In Heart

Brooding on that love
a true feeling rejected
confused and perplexed.
Never should we love discard
unless no spare room in heart!

July 8th, 2018

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Robert Lindley

August 5, 2018 at 8:11 AM

A very well penned Tanka my friend. One of the saddest events in ones live is when their true love is rejected. It is also a life lesson that many experience and hopefully grow from.. Truly a fine and poetic piece.. A fav..

Besma Riabi Dziri

August 5, 2018 at 3:56 PM

My honour and regards Robert, a great delight to greet you on my page.. thank you so much for your generous and deep feedback.. your appreciation is so precious.. Be blessed.

Pashang Salehi

July 12, 2018 at 2:46 AM

The heart has four chambers, one for love and three for pain and despair.

Pashang Salehi

July 15, 2018 at 1:44 AM

That is the reason I have a broken heart...

Besma Riabi Dziri

July 14, 2018 at 4:40 PM

Thank you so much Pashang for your interesting and generous comment. Stay safe and blessed always.

Faraz Ajmal

July 10, 2018 at 10:50 AM

This is a really lovely piece, there is truth in your words, when a love is rejected, it appears as if your whole life is finished, you don't left a desire to live, but guess what, the heart still go on and on, it still beats, telling us thst no matter what happens, it is still alive, good luck and have a really nice day

Besma Riabi Dziri

July 10, 2018 at 11:31 AM

Faraz, thank you so much for sparing your time to read my humble write and generously comment! Kind of you dear poet! My great pleasure! Stay safe and blessed always.

Silent One

July 9, 2018 at 4:09 PM

You are right, I agree with your message... You did the tanka very well..

Besma Riabi Dziri

July 10, 2018 at 11:17 AM

My honour and pleasure Silent One! I'm very glad you see my point! Always a great pleasure to see you on my page and read your uplifting feedbacks. Thank you so much. Stay safe and blessed always.

Maria Williams

July 9, 2018 at 3:03 AM

It is indeed very sad when love is rejected, yet the heart goes on, irregardless, with always a little space to squeeze some more in. Brilliant Tanka my friend a huge Fave for me....Maria hugs

Besma Riabi Dziri

July 10, 2018 at 11:26 AM

Dear Maria, it is with a great pleasure that I read your genuine and generous comments.. you have constantly been of great support on PS! A beautiful soul, heart and mind as you are dear friend thank you so much.. Stay safe and blessed always.

Arthur Vaso

July 9, 2018 at 1:35 AM

well you just melted mine!!! :)

Besma Riabi Dziri

July 9, 2018 at 2:06 AM

A unique feedback! I do appreciate your visit Arthur.. It is my honour and delight.. I enjoy being here on PS surrounded by beautiful souls of high value.. I thrive in Love and respect.. thank you so much Arthur. Stay safe and blessed always.

Lyric Man

July 8, 2018 at 8:45 PM

Besma.. Tonight, the mountain sky is clear. In a few hours the stars will tease me with their winks. The twilight is for your poem, and it's as enjoyable as the coming sunset!

Besma Riabi Dziri

July 9, 2018 at 2:09 AM

A great pleasure to read your generous words Lyric Man.. So kind of you to spill such a rewarding beauty on my humble write! Thank you so much. My deepest respect.. stay safe and blessed always.

Paul Callus

July 8, 2018 at 4:01 PM

A very meaningful Tanka, Besma. I believe that a loving heart always has space for more love! Regards // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri

July 9, 2018 at 2:00 AM

Thank you so much Paul for granting me the honour of your visit, for reading and appreciating.. that's my reward! That huge Love, one should never get enough!.. One love is but allowed to dwell in every corner of the heart! Best regards.. stay safe and blessed always.

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 8, 2018 at 3:11 PM

- So true, Besma - Lovely written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Besma Riabi Dziri

July 9, 2018 at 1:53 AM

I'm very delighted to see that you liked my write dear Anne-Lise.. Thank you so much for your visit and lovely feedback! Stay safe and blessed.

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 8, 2018 at 2:11 PM

A heart able to love loves infinitely my dearest friend, Bresma! A thought provoking Tanka excellently done!

Besma Riabi Dziri

July 9, 2018 at 1:50 AM

A loving and loveable Heart is able to be full to the brim! At the same time, only A love is greeted to fill in the heart's rooms! a great pleasure to read your profound and praising comment dear Demetrios.. Stay safe and blessed always.

Ravi Sathasivam

July 8, 2018 at 7:51 AM

Excellent. Beautifully penned. Thanks for sharing it.

Besma Riabi Dziri

July 9, 2018 at 1:42 AM

My pleasure! Thank you so much for stopping by and for appreciating my humble write! Stay safe and blessed.

Vijay Pandit

July 8, 2018 at 7:45 AM

Heart recognizes love..there is always room..sad when true feelings are rejected, as you say Besma. You make the point well in this poem.

Besma Riabi Dziri

July 9, 2018 at 1:40 AM

Dear Vijay, there is always room for Love, but not always a room for a specific love! I see you got my point! Always a great pleasure to read your precious comments.. stay safe and blessed always.

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