No Soul

As my tears soaked the pillow below, my sobbing state broke the silence of the wind. The pain in my chest, too painful to be broken, too hurt to be whole. I look up to see a mirror. In my eyes, I saw no soul.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chappell Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 4:46 PM
wow this is so strong to my minds thought here my friend
Anish Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 12:53 PM
A sad commentary in your prose poem. I hope you are doing well. Interesting piece here! Sincerely Matthew Anish
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